Robert, thanks for your comment
because the more I read this I
realized there was something
I didn't like about it and even
the title I felt was wrong.
It's helpful critique that one
shouldn't take personal and I
don't. TY
Water ice cold
aqua blue
Lake in stillness
smooth as glass
A fish rises
A ripple creases
disturbing the peace
A mayfly hatch
entices our minds
We string our poles
tie flies to match
Cast into reflections
trees & mountains
evergreen & granite
snowy peaks
Shine on the water
air still & fresh
We get some strikes
hear a splash
A blue & silver flash
fish in stillness
Time stands motionless
We revel in deja’vu
look up at the blue
Crisp & clear as water
ice cold shivers
Earth in stillness
silence of nature
breathing the only sound
the living hear
Air like water
sky now golden
Sun rises
rays slanting
Glistening rainbows
into the blue aqua
Lake in stillness
hearts beating
drumming the only sound
The earth shall hear
A fish rises
A reel whirs
lines burn
Release these demons
to breath
to live
to be
hearts in stillness
Water ice cold
aqua blue
blue & silver flashes
A rise on glass
water moves
as smooth sheer
Beauty in motion
reflects a moment
when time stands -still
The still the surface the deeper the water...this is beautiful Dale.
I can see one of the Rocky Mountain Lakes that reflect the mountains peering back at me.
A way to use your mind for silent communication. Speaking about the methods in the book I have used since a young age.
21st Century learning. I also have a GoFundMe page to ask for funds so I can research with other people and add their experiences
The second book in the telepathy series. It contains more ways for the up and coming telepathist to experiment with the sending and receiving of thoughts and is at the end of the story about future telepathy people found unexpectedly chosen by the go
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If you aren't, you should be published Dale!
ty, Dani
I can see one of the Rocky Mountain Lakes that reflect the mountains peering back at me.
~Dana~
wondered about that myself as I didn't
have those in on the first draft.
I appreciate your critique.
~Chrissie
"We revel in deja’vu
look up at the blue
Crisp & clear as water
ice cold shivers"-----you blew me away here!
Wonderful poetry Dale. Wonderful!
Thank You,
Teresa Emilie
Reindeer
I could feel the beat of "Stillness" within this one...so tranquil and smooth!!
Love Tinka
'We revel in deja’vu
look up at the blue
Crisp & clear as water
ice cold shivers
Soul Chasers
Earth in stillness
silence of nature
breathing the only sound
the living hear
Air like water
sky now golden "
Taylor