You Came to Me (poem) by Dale Clark on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Kathleen Herrick (Reader)

Reviewed on November 18, 2003

This is a very emotive poem. It's so easy to touch souls when emmotions from the heart are expressed. Bravo!

Sorry I haven't been reading your poems lately. :( I've been too busy in real life to comment much on AD. I'm glad I ran across your name on my old messages list. :)

Reviewed by Marlene Dawn

Reviewed on November 12, 2003

The feeling in this poem is extreme. I feel moved by it! Wonderfully written.

Marlene

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on November 12, 2003

I wish I could convey how outstanding this poem is, Every word just rocked the soul and heart, beautiful, just beautifully expressed and so deeply moving, I loved this one,

Reindeer

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)

Reviewed on November 11, 2003

MY GOD! Dale that last stanza....and this bit---->..that unfolded me into this man I couldn’t be <-----that is profound........thank you for sharing this poem.......Dani

Reviewed by Transcendental Poet (Reader)

Reviewed on November 10, 2003

This is amazing!

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Reviewed on November 10, 2003

Dale....wonderful write!!!!

Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)

Reviewed on November 9, 2003

{{{{Dale}}}}
WOW oh WOW!
This is a real masterpiece of expression, emotion and so much more. So many deep and hidden layers, and what open and even keel expression from one line to the next...I am awed, humbled and just WOW so deeply impressed!!!!
((((Hugs))))
~Nikki~

Reviewed by Dana Matthews (Reader)

Reviewed on November 9, 2003

Whew...Dale...now that is rich! Kinda left a funny empty feeling in my chest. Very profound...very moving...very good!

~Dana~

Reviewed by Al Swanson (Reader)

Reviewed on November 9, 2003

very crisp writing Dale, and emotionally clear, Al

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on November 9, 2003

deeply balanced emotionally melancholic write... well done!

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on November 9, 2003

Great write!

Reviewed by Trixie Love

Reviewed on November 9, 2003

Dale, I must agree with
the others...

Superb!!!!

Trixie :)

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on November 9, 2003

Deep and intense emotions well-expressed. Enjoyed this!

May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)

Reviewed on November 9, 2003

You said I was brilliant
my light, my flame
but I had dimmed before
you came into my life
You couldn’t know that

..Never could you dimm in any way..not YOU!!!
OH..such a beautiful write..
ty

Vesna

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on November 9, 2003

Very deep emotional, bittersweet, heartfelt write Dale!!

This one really touch my heart....I felt it deeply!!

Hope you are okay my friend!!

< < <Tears>>>

Love Tinka

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on November 9, 2003

deeply moving poem of our own self-demeaning.as the saying goes"we are our own worst enemy" I think when we can accept ourselves with all our faults, it makes it easier for others to do so too.Sorry didn't mean to get carried away. I loved the poem,dA.E, it stirred my emotions!;-)