Haunted Dreams (poem) by Dale Clark on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Sassy Cat (Reader)

Reviewed on December 9, 2003

Dale, I loved not only the words, but the pattern of this poem, how each ends in a one word descriptive of the stanza. Excellent!! You sir, need to post more of these on other sites for us all to enjoy! HUGSSSS

Sassy *S*

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on November 24, 2003

Chilling write, indeed! Enjoyed this very much, and I agree that dreams can be many different things to many different people.

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)

Reviewed on November 24, 2003

You're pretty amazing yourself ;)

Dreams....Good or bad they make for some fantastic fodder for thought. An excellent poem...Enjoyed Dale ty, Dani

Reviewed by Al Swanson (Reader)

Reviewed on November 24, 2003

dale you have something here, for many are bound by images of dreams, I know my mother mentioned something similiar to me, and I have had vile dreams as well, Al

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on November 23, 2003

This moved me so this evening, outstandingly beautiful and haunting,

Reindeer

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on November 23, 2003

the tomb in our hearts opens at its own will...

excellent poem!

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on November 23, 2003

Well done, very dark and emotive.

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on November 23, 2003

chilled the bones, the thought of chains repulse, the imagery gripping and haunting...Excellent write!

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on November 23, 2003

I liked this stanza the best,

"These chains I carry
into my sleep
clattering "

Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)

Reviewed on November 23, 2003

"They touch what I can’t feel"---DALE! DALE! DALE! I love this thought and the way you did this.

Excellent work Dale.... I love screaming in your den ;) -lol.

Thank You,
Emilie

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on November 23, 2003

Awesome write and well-said.

Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu :o)

Reviewed by Taylor Trenton (Reader)

Reviewed on November 23, 2003

Dale,
This one touhed me deeply this morning.
I wrote of numbness too. Excellent poetry.

"These dreams astound me
they seem so real
incredibly

They touch what I can’t feel
and become numbing
pathetically "

Taylor

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on November 23, 2003

Wow!! Dale this is a haunting write....and makes me feel sad!!

I really do Hope you can manage to deal with those haunting dreams!!

For the poem... it's very touching and excellently written!!

Love & Hugs Tinky!!