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Babble
by Southern Comfort → (All Poetry by Southern Comfort)
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When he does everything so right, he reduces you to incoherent Babbling!

OOOOOOOO YES! YES!
Is my urging you on to attain Passion's Quest.
OOOOO Baby, Baby! Yes right there!
I am so excited as I feel the cobra approach the lair.
With sighing, quivering and elevated breathing,
I am flushing pink, as my bosom is heaving!
OOOOO Touch me, Touch me, feel my fire!
Keep fanning the flames of desire!
My back is arched and there is a curl to my toes,
I am wanton, excited and expect everything to go!
Devour me, consume me, make my fantasies play!
I have an urgent need of satisfaction, please without delay!
I shall not be coy, all lays bare upon the table,
So help yourself, I am so ready, willing and able!
The passion fruit is juicy and sweet,
Juices pool for a succulent treat.
Melons are large and ripe, ready to share,
Pink centers stand erect, straining and bare.
With slight hesitation, slow lazy moves,
An erect tongue slides along the groove.
It wiggles, smoothly slips and slides,
Then centering, quivering, decides to abide.
Incoherent babbling, the language of delight,
The proper communication when the foreplay is right.
A sudden impaling, no mercy to be had,
The victim is so willing, sated and glad!  

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Reviewed by Michael LaSalle (Reader)
Reviewed on June 5, 2007
pattiann, your word play is SO exquisite, i could write a book about
the way you pen passion, the Masterpiece artist that you are,
I love your poetry beyond words! mike

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on May 30, 2007
Too hot I like that a lot...
xoxoxo

Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on May 30, 2007
Hot! The cobra is hissing lol
and I'll babble just for you
sweet passionate lady.
Hugs
Dale

Reviewed by Lydia Shutter (Reader)
Reviewed on May 30, 2007
Hot, steamy, passionate. You go GF! Lydi***

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on May 30, 2007
S.C.,

Very passionate and sensuous writing. Turn on the air conditioner. It's 212 degrees in here.

Reviewed by Lewis Findley (Reader)
Reviewed on May 30, 2007
Raw and unbridled passion as only a sweet sugar mama can write. Have a LOVELY day, Love you, Teddy

Reviewed on May 30, 2007
The language of Love is spoken here!
How passionate I feel you heart /etc. Swell! SC

This is a FANTASTIC Heartfelt write!
A gem I KNOW I will treasure!
I still am burning up from it! Smiling at ya'
I wanted to write something, like a spin off from this, but too tired to think... Time for cool sheets, maybe later... YOu have inspired my loins to join in a unison song~
"Incoherent Babbling" NO Dah, Perfect salutations! The Victim LOL
and what a happy Victim He/She will be!
Ahhhhhhh... I fall over my words here, as I read your heart flutter!
WArmly, Warrior Spirit Lady PURPLE Sheeeoox
BE SAFE!
STay POsitive!
and Happy!

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on May 30, 2007
The monitor of my PC is melting!!!!!! Heeelp!!!
A roasting poem this one.
Georg


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