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The Substitute
by Southern Comfort → (All Poetry by Southern Comfort)
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You are gone, but my body still has wants and needs, that I will allow him to meet.

I close my eyes and ABRACADABRA, he's you!
He's not the real thing, but he will do.
He doesn't know that he is your substitute,
Through fantasy and trickery, he suits.
I insist that we make love in the dark,
I forbid him to speak, so my desire will spark.
I've taught him to touch me the way you use to do,
Your eyes are dark, but his are very blue.
Your body was my caramel delight,
His is quite hairy and pink and white.
When his lips touch mine, it is yours I truly seek,
I keep my eyes closed tight, I never peek.
He can make my nipples hard, for they can be fooled,
He is quite large like you, he knows how ro use his tool.
I will endeavor to love him, the way I did you,
My trickery is consealed quite well, behind eyes of aqua blue.
I am a Steel Magnolia, I can hide things very well,
What my heart is really feeling, I'll never tell.
I hope you miss me, Baby, for you are a ghost in my bed,
I hope thoughts of me vex you and haunt your head.


     

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Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on June 24, 2007
This is a universal theme, SC. Sadly, most relationships in this life simple do not "work." Many just make them work and spend their lives mending fences, wrecking them and mending them again. Thank you. Be sweet too,

Regis (Professor Dreamy)

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on June 23, 2007
This one is so sad and yet all too true in too many relationships. When the love we cannot have is not allowed to us we often substitute as the title suggests. Is it right...is it wrong only each person can decide that for themself.

Fee

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on June 23, 2007
As long as the ghost gets a little nibble?
Hugs.....


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