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The Screaming Silence
by Southern Comfort → (All Poetry by Southern Comfort)
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Lack of communication and misunderstanding, killed this relationship that was just blooming

When communication is just a circle of
misunderstood words,
Nothing is solved and no one is heard.
He is evasive and she speaks her mind,
Sadly no common ground could they find.
He wants to generalize, she wants intimate talk,
He can't decide where she fits, she feels it's time to walk.
Both feel right and neither one will give in,
So what could have been magic, will probably end.
Were there ever any caring feelings there?
There were on her side, she was learning to care.
Two confused hearts, not knowing what to do,
Neither willing to tip their hand, by saying," Don't go because I care about you!"
Now the screaming silence hangs in the air,
With no one makin a first move, the relationship hasn't a prayer.
When all is said and done and neither one will try,
There will only be one word said aloud and it is," Good-bye!"

 

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 Reviews of "The Screaming Silence"
Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on June 25, 2007
I think you have read my mind and looked into my heart when you wrote this one, poignant to the max.

Fee

Reviewed by Lydia Shutter (Reader)
Reviewed on June 25, 2007
Heartbreaking write, PA. Too often a relationship has died and no one involved has the smarts to bury it. Well written. Lydi**

Reviewed by Ted Bossis
Reviewed on June 25, 2007
This is absolutely touching & every other word I almost used -evol=love {Ted}


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