Why should we hide feelings for one another as if they are a dirty little secret.
I have feelings for you! Why can't this be said?
Why should feelings cause so much dread.
We become too afraid to let feelings be known,
Will rejection be the reward if feelings are shown?
Children are allowed to blurt feelings out,
Honesty is what they are all about.
Adults prefer innuendo's waltz,
To just hint at feelings, so nothing is lost.
You offhandedly slip a feeling in,
If taken wrong you can claim it in jest, just pretend.
Were you serious, or just at play?
Just what did you really say?
Since when is declaring care a misguided deed?
After all affection is what we all crave and need.
Should affecrion and caring be stiffled before it blooms?
Should they be hidden and kept entombed?
Having the freedom to share a fantasy,
To let your thoughts run wild and free.
To say whatever you will,
To have someone understand and like you still.
Between man and woman, there is sadly a gap,
Different body parts are a social trap.
We should enjoy the difference, but not let it deter,
A chance for a bonding between him and her.
Take your feelings to a new high,
Then share them with a gal or guy.
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Reviews of "I Have Feelings For You"
Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
Reviewed on June 28, 2007
You are so right on with this excellent poem! I could not agree with you more!
Reindeer
Reviewed by Jennifer Howard (Reader)
Reviewed on June 27, 2007
you have yet to stop amazing me by your poetry. I love your work. I have to say it again... the connection I do feel with your work awes me!
Thank you for being you and writing from your core!
SC your a scholar and a poet,those sound like words to live by.
Nice write,games do get old quickly....take care
Reviewed by Lydia Shutter (Reader)
Reviewed on June 26, 2007
"Should affecrion and caring be stiffled before it blooms?" Heavens NO! Ccmmunication is always the key to a relationship. Sage words expressed beautifully, PA. Haunting melody to accompany your words. Lydi**
Well I have "no" {none} problem with excepting this & May I add you deserve prizes -yea that's right PRIZES- For such a clear & bold declaration of the gamesmanship played - With no referees -Crystal clear intentions of good-grace-love-beauty-And other unknowable terms should be open.{I have never used a period on this site-EVER} GOD BLESS YOU & YOUR SENSE OF BEAUTY- - -YOUR { } Ted -
Hundreds of excerpts from the archives of the Narcissistic Abuse Study List regarding Pathological Narcissism, relationships with abusive narcissists, and the Narcissistic Personality Disorder (NPD).
Hundreds of excerpts from the archives of the Narcissistic Abuse Study List regarding Pathological Narcissism, relationships with abusive narcissists, and the Narcissistic Personality Disorder (NPD).
Reindeer
Thank you for being you and writing from your core!
Nice write,games do get old quickly....take care
Yes, we shouldn't keep it all inside like
my wife does. One day she will explod...
Hugs...