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Not A Sure Thing
by Southern Comfort → (All Poetry by Southern Comfort)
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I will never be your SURE THING, there will always be a doubt

Don't grasp me, let your touch be light,
Don't try to bind me, or hold me too tight.
You must set me free and see if back to you I'll fly,
You don't own me, so be prepared to tell me good-bye.
Don't need me, want me, I am not a blanket of security,
You can't possess me, for I belong to me.
Don't take me for granted, assuming that I will stay,
When I become too familiar, I'll go away.
I will never be a sure thing, there will always be doubt,
I will always be the mystery you can't figure out.
I am never commonplace, always aloof,
I am evasive, if you demand proof.
I am a maverick, who wants no brand,
I am as stable as the shifting sand.
I will always be just out of touch,
The treasure you quest for and want so much.




 

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 Reviews of "Not A Sure Thing"
Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on July 2, 2007
VEry well said SC with truth and conviction that is powerful but straight forward and honest. Well done.

Fee

Reviewed by Walt Hardester
Reviewed on July 2, 2007
Now thisun here sounds like it could be about money
lol

Walt

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on July 2, 2007
One doesn't own the fruit, just eat it and enjoy the sweet taste.
A great poem.
Georg

Reviewed by Lydia Shutter (Reader)
Reviewed on July 2, 2007
Wow, you sure have described a woman of mystery here! "I will always be the mystery you can't figure out." Way to keep the man around for sure! Loved it, PA! Oh, and that midi..."Can I just have one more dance with you, my love?" Perfectamundo! Lydi**

Reviewed by Ted Bossis
Reviewed on July 2, 2007
OK - I will respect this write as it stands - But shifting sands are often surrounded by large water masses - If I should be swimming by & sense you are near - May I stop and say hello - Or just continue on my flow - - -{love & respect - Ted}

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on July 1, 2007
Your just a lovely rolling stone aint ya...
the only sure thing is, I will read your work...
A bunch of hugs and kissen....


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