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What Just Happened?
by Southern Comfort → (All Poetry by Southern Comfort)
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Miscommunication, stubborn pride and mistrust made this relationship go South

He wished her GOD's speed and sent her on her way,
Never thinking to say," Don't go, I want you to stay!"
He mumbled," Oh sure, I'll miss you, but I'll shake it off!"
Silently thinking," The Hell with you, I'm keepin my feelings aloft!"
There was no," Please Darlin, keep in touch",
Just Ta-Ta for now, you really don't mean much.
She looked at him, just shaking her head, she didn't understand,
As he retreated to the Isle Of Man.
He was clueless that he had just failed her," WANT ME TEST, he was ill prepared,
Women always test, to see if men really care.
Men are just too busy being manly, to show a caring side,
They are caught up in dealing with their foolish pride.
So what just happened here? Do you have a clue?
In this same situation what would you do?
Women are from Venus, Men are from Mars,
The battle between the sexes rages on, it's written in the stars.
No wonder men and women can't relate,
Women want to be wooed and men would rather meditate!



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 Reviews of "What Just Happened?"
Reviewed by stan nassano
Reviewed on July 12, 2007
I must of been OUT TO LUNCH when ya posted this little gem stone,darlin,nice hippetty,dippiety,tuney to.
seeya later gator

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on July 10, 2007
Well, this is a twist
My wife shows not-a feelings..
Hugs SC....

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on July 10, 2007
S.C.,

I sort of agree. there's nothing wrong in showing a little feeling once in awhile. I salute women and feelings. Bless You, Paul.

Reviewed by Walt Hardester
Reviewed on July 10, 2007
How true SC....and the freakin answers aren't in the back of the book like they used to be

men claim to be superior to wimmin in smarts

but most times we're just spupid ole farts.....

However.....

Any man who understands women, is one...

Quote by Waylon Jennings..(rest his outlaw soul)

Walt

Reviewed by Lydia Shutter (Reader)
Reviewed on July 10, 2007
Sure, there are plenty of differences between men and women. I say, "vive la difference!" Good write, PA. Lydi**

Reviewed by Ted Bossis
Reviewed on July 10, 2007
Not all humans created= sameness in sensitive matters {understood} love - Ted


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