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Can You Feel Me?
by Southern Comfort → (All Poetry by Southern Comfort)
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You wear her memory like a shroud and I cannot compete with a memory of perfection.

I am in your bed, but not really there,
I am at your side, but you don't care.
When we make love, you close your eyes,
Then I become her in disguise.
You nuzzle my breasts and suck on pink tips,
Then it's my body within your need slips.
You wear her memory like a shroud,
When you find sweet release, it is her name you moan out loud.
Then you open your eyes, all dazed and confused,
Once again she becomes the winner and once again I lose.
Can you feel me?, do you realize that I am there?
It breakes my heart, knowing that you don't care!
To you, she floats on gossamer wings, while I walk on the ground,
But I am the hidden treasure, you haven't found.
I just can't compete, you are blinded by her light,
She and she alone will always be perfection in your sight.
So to save my pride, I will bid you fond adieu,
For you will never see or feel me, I will never get through


  

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 Reviews of "Can You Feel Me?"
Reviewed on July 14, 2007
Sad, but I feel the subject's strength in her parting words.
Lovely, SC!

Write on!
Jules

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on July 13, 2007
Sad, that this goes on.
Should be a crime for sure..
Hugs...
Love the writing....

Reviewed by Lydia Shutter (Reader)
Reviewed on July 13, 2007
Competing with an angel is a no win situation. Perhaps it is time to drop out of the race. Good poetry. lydi**

Reviewed by Walt Hardester
Reviewed on July 13, 2007
My wife is so vain,
When she cums,
She calls out her own name.......
Rodney Dangerfield

Walt

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on July 13, 2007
You just erased her memory with a love's earthquake shake.
You can keep on compiting.
Georg

Reviewed by stan nassano
Reviewed on July 13, 2007
Nice pen SC,I just can't imagine you ever being 2nd fiddle.
Your words do ring true ,though,the past can be hard to leave behind.

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on July 13, 2007
Sadly this is all too often in relationships and unless we chose to walk away instead of hanging around hoping things change there is not much else to do.

Fee

Reviewed by Ted Bossis
Reviewed on July 13, 2007
Powerful & real almost surreal - Love be known from you-To you-Available willfully in every breath -{love-Ted}

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on July 12, 2007
Sad as this is the only answer in such cases. Great write of this experience.


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