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Sharing The Love
by Southern Comfort → (All Poetry by Southern Comfort)
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Donnie was my dream man and on a getaway he doubled my pleasure

I met Donnie at a Western Bar,
He was the lead singer of the in house band and played a mean guitar.
His eyes zeroed in on me, I felt the heat,
He was a real hottie, someone I wanted to meet.
When the band took a break, he came and sat with me,
We hit it off right away, we had chemistry.
I started to go and watch him play, everynight,
During his breaks he would kiss me and hold me tight.
We started dating exclusively,
Where you saw Donnie, you also saw me.
Donnie was walking passion in cowboy boots, he fulfilled my dreams,
His love making was so intense, he'd make me scream!
We were going to his family's get-away, a cabin in the woods,
We needed some time alone, away from the nightlife would do us good.
It was such a lovely cabin, fully stocked and with no one for miles around,
It was complete silence, some crickets were the only sound.
Donnie fixed me dinner and kept my wine glass filled,
I became quite groggy, couldn't tell what was fantasy and what was real.
I must have blacked out, for I came to in a bed,
I was totally nude and was out of my head.
I saw Donnie sucking my breast, but at the same time kissing my lips,
I felt multiple hands groping my body and lips consuming my nipples with deep sips.
A seeking tongue was licking my pink pearl,
While other lips were sucking my nipples, rocking my world.
I was put in a crazed sexual state,
Then a hard shaft slipped inside me, it's need to sate.
Wild thrusts sent me swirling, my nipple hardened in comsuming lips,
My back arched in orgasm, while strong hands steadied my hips.
Soon I felt him shudder and my body was filled with seed,
He seemed to disapper, then I was mounted again, while another hard shaft
was in need.
Urgent lips sought my nipples again and again,
I was riding orgasm's wave without end.
This orgy went on for what seemed like an eternity,
In my deluded mind, two men were making love to me.
With the morning light, I awoke to a surprise,
I found myself in bed with Donnie and his twin Ronnie, I really had sex with two guys.
My shocked look made them both grin,
They smiled and said," Twins share everything, are you ready to go again?"






   

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 Reviews of "Sharing The Love"
Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on July 19, 2007
Two for the price of one, I am not sure, great story but have to agree with Peggy and Felix. Thanks for a great write.
Rose

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on July 18, 2007
Hee, hee, to what La Belle said...
Loads of breast action in this one. Great!
Hugs..........
Some review people gets soooo serious?

Reviewed by twinklewrites at her desk (Reader)
Reviewed on July 18, 2007
OMG...Very interesting read and I would have to agree with Felix...other than that great story SC...hugs, Peggy

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on July 18, 2007
I know this was written with a sense of humor but it could also have been a tragedy for they used you without your knowledge and at the risk of sounding like a prude anyone who would do somthing like that would also condone gang bang type activities and date rape drugs for it is pretty similiar. Anyway I am glad it did turn out okay but also concerned of other more vunerable girls being taking advantage of by these two.

Fee

Reviewed on July 18, 2007
Beautiful memory, two, two, more fun than one! LOL As a twin, I appreciated this: but Karen and I couldn't pull off the ole bait and switch. LOL Well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on July 18, 2007
That was a bargain if I ever have seen one, two for the price of one!
That or you was seeing liquor double.
Then again, men don't get so lucky.
Georg

Reviewed on July 18, 2007
Oh My, how'd you tell them apart...no don't answer that!


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