He was the perfect man, with the perfect line, he broke my heart and my mind.
Lured by his beauty, beguild by his words,
I was his willing Love Slave and cooing Lovebird.
I blindly ignored the handwriting on the wall,
I tripped, stumbled and finally did fall.
He hand fed me his line,
He decieved me and played games with my mind.
I became just another conquest in his wicked scheme,
He created a Wonderland of bubbles, not as it seemed.
He soon grew weary and wanted to stop,
I fell to the ground when all the bubbles went pop.
He just wanted a safe place to land, I wanted to nest,
I gave him my all, but couldn't pass his test.
I was just a warm body to ward off the cold,
He was never really mine to have and to hold.
He was the Pied Piper that lured my foolish heart,
He promised forever, but was soon to depart.
When you dance to the melodic tune of the Piper, he will demand his pay,
Leave yout heart in pieces and go merrily on his way.
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Reviews of "Lure Of The Piper"
Reviewed by Michael LaSalle (Reader)
Reviewed on July 21, 2007
WOW, Im hypnotized, has it all!
Intrigue, seduction and heartbreak,
i love the way you created the
aspect of need and desire,
in this poem, the piper in need of
beauty, to fulfill his fate
beauty desiring meaning,
departing, one as heartbroken,
but which one truly, perhaps both,
as beauty gains wisdom, overall the
piper merely fades your Skilled,
cunning, power of expression
is truly top notch! like watching the best directed movie one could watch.
love this sweet p, your muse is defining!
Reviewed by Lydia Shutter (Reader)
Reviewed on July 19, 2007
Heartbreaking words....and that song is haunting. I know it is from Dirty Dancin' but can not remember the title. Great job, PA. Lydi**
Intrigue, seduction and heartbreak,
i love the way you created the
aspect of need and desire,
in this poem, the piper in need of
beauty, to fulfill his fate
beauty desiring meaning,
departing, one as heartbroken,
but which one truly, perhaps both,
as beauty gains wisdom, overall the
piper merely fades your Skilled,
cunning, power of expression
is truly top notch! like watching the best directed movie one could watch.
love this sweet p, your muse is defining!
"Your heart in pieces as he goes merrily
on his way"
No claims of dyslexia please.
Georg
The piper, he a viper?
Hugs.....