You cold-hearted wench, what you did to that beautiful man was a damn cryin shame!
Woman of his past, I would like to slap your face!
You are a cold-hearted shrew, what you did was a disgrace!
He gave you years of love and devotion,
Your reward?, you set him adrift on life's cruel ocean.
Then he washed up on my friendly shore,
I found him to be so beautiful and so worthy to be adored.
His gentle brown eyes held so much pain,
His sweet heart was scarred and the scars will always remain.
You are a cruel bitch, you wish to suck his essence dry,
Cut the heart out of this wonderful guy.
You tried to emasculate him and tried to destroy,
You used him up and threw him away like a broken toy.
Are you blind? Why couldn't you see?
The man is a treasure and so beautiful to me!
He came to me broken and so full of despair,
I gathered him close and showed him that I did care.
Woman you are so foolish, I now claim your lost treasure as my own,
Your greatest joy was to always bitch and moan.
Each day that he graces my life is a delight,
Your castaway man is so beautiful in my sight.
I wish to thank-you for being blind,
For you threw away a Slice Of Heaven, I now call mine!
Music: Cold-Hearted Snake
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Reviews of "Your Loss"
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on August 21, 2007
Sounds like my wife for some reason...
You can write about anything sweety.
Your just a joy...
Huggin and kissin and love-in
Ron
She isn't worth a damned thing. She gets what she deserves. Hold him close SC, he is a treasure that we can see. She is just another She-Bitch. Wish them all back to where they came from!
Keep him safe from her SC, you beautiful soul!!
This is sad but it do happen but it's great to know we do have someone there on our side and see us for what we are worth beautiful and so worthy to be adored. Thanks for sharing.
You can write about anything sweety.
Your just a joy...
Huggin and kissin and love-in
Ron
Georg
Walt
Keep him safe from her SC, you beautiful soul!!
i knew there was a wildcat rearing to get out SC nice slapdown,
stan
Fee
A beautiful realization. Hey! how did you know I had brown eyes? (lol)
WE just know!
Great write SC
WArm hugs and love, WArrior Lady Purple Sheeeoox
STay Positive!
STAy SAFE!