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Lay Lady Lay
by Southern Comfort → (All Poetry by Southern Comfort)
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I fell hard for you and when you said," Lay Lady Lay Across My Big Brass Bed', I did it willingly, to my shame.

I got in your bed, just to discover stale perfume and heat,
What other woman had just left her essence on your sheet.
I found out that your brass bed, had served more then McDolald's Golden Arches,
Your bedroom door revolves, where hordes of women marches.
You speak of eternal love, that just lasts a day,
You whisper," I love you', as under the sheets you play!
You say," Lay Lady Lay, across my big, brass bed",
The promised love of today, tomorrow will be dead.
Your skilled fingers play my body like a Spanish guitar,
You released my passion, but didn't take it far.
You give the Ladies one short trip to paradise,
For very soon they can see through your lies!
So as you whisper," Lay Lady Lay, across my big brass bed!",
I will enjoy today's passion, for tomorrow it will be dead!

Music: Lay Lady Lay




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 Reviews of "Lay Lady Lay"
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on August 24, 2007
Another emotive offering!!

Bloody Jerk!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Ann Scarborough
Reviewed on August 22, 2007
Take what you want from him tonight SC, and slap the bejesus out of him tomorrow. What a JERK!
Great write though,
Love ya,
Ann

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on August 22, 2007
It happens..
Excellent write SC
Hugs...

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on August 22, 2007
Bob Dylan ought to be proud to have inspired this in some way, SC. Love and best wishes,

Regis (Reg)

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on August 22, 2007
SC those are the one night stands I was talking about, we gotta watch out for them. Thank you for sharing.
Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on August 22, 2007
S.C.,

Love can be sad and for whatever reason it is can become a great learning experience. I don't think I could ever take intimacy to a meaningless level. Just being with someone for the sake of sex, to me, is a fruitless endeavor. Life is too short to face it without purpose. Sorry to ramble on so, Blessings Always, Paul. I did love your Golden Arches humor in this, "Over One Billion Served" takes on a whole new meaning. (lol)

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on August 22, 2007
Bob Dylan got me when he sung Stoned, since then I don't care if for tomorrow I should be dead.
Whisper...whisper...I am listening.
Georg

Reviewed by Larry Lounsbury
Reviewed on August 21, 2007
Love the song, as long as the love continues.

Reviewed by Ted Bossis
Reviewed on August 21, 2007
What decisions lie before us - Well meant souls will not be lost -{love-Ted}

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on August 21, 2007
Ahhh SC Dylan himself would love this write that tells the shit like it is. LOL

Fee

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on August 21, 2007
Dylan is a man of his time. SC, we choose who we lay down with. Never regret your choice, because there is always a reason for that interlude, whether it is just physical satisfaction, or to learn a lesson..Choices my dear, make love empowering..
Peace, Love, and Light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by stan nassano
Reviewed on August 21, 2007
I love Dylan and your write makes a lot of sense to me SC,
stan


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