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I Hate You!
by Southern Comfort → (All Poetry by Southern Comfort)
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What does a poet do when life kicks their ass, they write a damn poem bout it.

I hate the way you make me feel,
I hate the way you ooze sex appeal.
I hate your beautiful smiling face,
I want you to vanish without a trace.
I hate your voice that makes me melt,
I hate when your words are so heartfelt,
I hate you more with every passing day,
I hate it when you go away.
I hate it when the phone rings and it's you,
I hate it that I love you and don't know what to do.
I hate it that you broke my heart,
I hate myself for loving you from the start!
I hate that you won't let me leave,
I hate that life without you makes me grieve!
I hate that when I say I hate you, you know that it's a lie,
I hate that you keep calling to me and won't let me say good-bye!
We have become each other's drug of choice,
My addiction, keeps my final good-bye mute, it steals my voice.
I try to run away and hide,
But you always find me and dump me back into the emotional riptide.
I hate you! I hate you, why can't you understand,
It's just that my heart loves you, you troubling man!

Music: Comfortably numb




 

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 Reviews of "I Hate You!"
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on August 29, 2007
Very powerful SC
Hugs......

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on August 29, 2007
Now that's saying what you feel without a doubt!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Jennave Coz
Reviewed on August 29, 2007
Heart snagged held fast,Your perfect poem, reminds me, It's so good and so bad, to be torn...No pun intended,I wish you well, and then think you may be at the other end of the moment,Touching feelings, and then feeling the sting, Yet I Thank you for conveying my own mad dream...Love ya!Jen

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on August 29, 2007
Oh Sc I wish I were there to hug you and tell you all will be fine with time, but you are to upset to see that now and Fee is right, they say there's a fine line between love and hate. Take care.
Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on August 28, 2007
Isn't the nectar cup incessantly filling itself up no matter how much you drink? adicted?........oh yeah!!!!!
Georg

Reviewed by twinklewrites at her desk (Reader)
Reviewed on August 27, 2007
Great rant SC...Hugs, Peggy

Reviewed by Silent Dream
Reviewed on August 27, 2007
There are times when I want to find the words for such an inner struggle. You know me... ;) But I imagine being able to do so, is freeing.

Pen on! ((LOve you))
~yourDreamyGal

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on August 27, 2007
Good rant.

Elizabeth

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on August 27, 2007
These cognitive processes, I believe, need a good dose of b-vitamins, and also some co-enzyme Q10. I hope that you are OK!
Richard

Reviewed by Larry Lounsbury
Reviewed on August 27, 2007
Love this poem. It has such a sweet sense of a womans loving nature.

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on August 27, 2007
To hate so passionately is to love so unconditionally..I have been there, I understand!

Peace, Love, and Light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Ann Scarborough
Reviewed on August 27, 2007
Right there with you SC!!! I'll share the stack of T-Shirts and cry. Darn men anyway, they make you love them and then they break your heart.
Tell them like it is.
Love You!
Ann

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on August 27, 2007
Hahahaha!!!!! Gotta love it . . . Or hate it . . . Hahahahaha!!!

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on August 27, 2007
They say love and hater walk a fine line side by side together...jen this is blunt but open

Fee

Reviewed by Ted Bossis
Reviewed on August 27, 2007
I love when your blunt - I love why your upfront - I love your bold writes - I love your good nights - I love your honest appraisal - Either personnel or universal -Love - Ted

Reviewed by Walt Hardester
Reviewed on August 27, 2007
Dam straight Sissy

Walt

Reviewed on August 27, 2007
Oh Lord, what a place to be! It's a catch 22 for sure SC. Great write.


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