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Fatal Attraction
by Southern Comfort → (All Poetry by Southern Comfort)
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What are we doing? One of us should just leave and let the other grieve.

Once again you have made me cry,
Why can't I wise up and tell you good-bye?
What do you really want from me?
Please find out or just leave me be!
I fell in love with you quite by accident,
You were my first attempt at love and I didn't know what love meant.
So far loving you means tears and pain,
Why I am still in love with you, is a mystery I can't explain.
I never classed myself as a fool, too dumb to learn,
But like a mindless month I jump in your flame and burn.
Why do we cling together when we should leave,
Parting from you feels like a death and makes me grieve.
One of us should be strong and just disappear,
But Lover's Gravity's pull keeps us here.
We both have other routes we can take,
One of us should go, for the other's sake.
I know we should definitely part,
But it will be hard for me to survive, because you own my heart!


    

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 Reviews of "Fatal Attraction"
Reviewed by Silent Dream
Reviewed on September 16, 2007
Sounds quite painful. Especially when all that comes to mind is the tears. A heartfelt piece.

Thinking of you and sending ((LOve and Hugs))

~yourDreamyGal

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on September 9, 2007
Another sadie one, but always written excellently..
Kissin and huggin and lovin
Ron

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on September 9, 2007
SC,
No one can own anything of another's unless granted permission. Take your heart back, return to sender, and leap off that mountain of fear!
Be brave and do what is best for your own spirit, dear lady.
Peace, Love, and Light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on September 8, 2007
Oh SC Love is blind and it is hard for us to see ahead of hurt and pain but Happiness do ly ahead, if we just focus on it. Thank you for sharing.
Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on September 8, 2007
Very emotional write...one I can feel within ever fiber of me body!!

Gotta love what Georg said.those bloody onions got to me eyes too with this one!!

Love tinka

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on September 8, 2007
What I am for you, an open onion in yore eyes? you cryin' a lot and ain't doin' nuthin' to get the water runnin'
Georg

Reviewed by Jennave Coz
Reviewed on September 8, 2007
Tragic beauty twice combined,Love's growing pains so well defined.I hope you are well.Jen

Reviewed on September 7, 2007
SC,

Too many living this: I pray this isn't your reality. If it is, get out before it's too late...................poignantly penned heartbreak.

(((((HUGS))))) and love, Little Stormie

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on September 7, 2007
deeply moving sentiments, SC ...

Reviewed by twinklewrites at her desk (Reader)
Reviewed on September 7, 2007
Time to brake away from and find another replace,someone to pick you up and put a smile on your face forever more...Hugs and Love, Peggy

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce
Reviewed on September 7, 2007
Oh, this is heartfelt sad. Hope you are well.

Sandie May Angel :o(

Reviewed by Ann Scarborough
Reviewed on September 7, 2007
Oh Sissy, I have lived this so many times. Heartfelt write!
Ann

Reviewed by stan nassano
Reviewed on September 7, 2007
another heartfelt write,SC,life is a struggle,i hope things work out for you ...peace ,love and happiness to you,you deserve them all and more,
stan

Reviewed by Ted Bossis
Reviewed on September 7, 2007
Sensitive lovers <>Time & Tides <>Flowing & glowing <>Moment by moment -love * Ted


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