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Waltz Of The Unloved
by Southern Comfort → (All Poetry by Southern Comfort)
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The unloved, unwanted souls, are the walking wounded of an existence without loving care.

The desolate cadence of a lonely heart,
As it cracks, splinters and finally breaks apart.
Behind the grotesque mask of serenity, hides the pain,
The vacant eyes reflect solitude, while chaos fills the brain.
The Zombie-like body, twists in the wind,
It embraces and trys to deal with the agony within.
The waltz of the mindless, sleepwalks around the floor,
Couples shuffle to and fro, not caring for anything more.
The unwanted, loveless, are the walking dead,
They have heard it all, there is nothing left to be said.
They stubbornly refuse to walk into light,
To end their suffering and remedy their plight.

Music: Dark Carven


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 Reviews of "Waltz Of The Unloved"
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on October 28, 2007
Well done
ron

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on October 26, 2007
Thank you for sharing such a chilling dark write, somany too stubborn to walk into the light.
Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed on October 26, 2007


I have enjoyed the reading of "Waltz Of The Unloved".

In admiration,


Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on October 26, 2007
In the arms of this Zombie you will go Dancing Matilda in Australia!!!
Unloved? nah!!!!!!!
Georg

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on October 25, 2007
Tis true you know. There are, sadly, many out there just like this. Having spent a lifetime in dismal dispair they see nothing left for them. Nice write....

Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
Reviewed on October 25, 2007
Such a sad commentary, but ever so true. I know a few of them. It doesn't matter how you try to help or what you say - they can't seem to find the Light.

Kathy

Reviewed by Rey C (Reader)
Reviewed on October 25, 2007
"The unloved, unwanted souls, are the walking wounded of an existence without loving care"... 'tis not you Lady Blue Skies, for you are loved... aloha!

Reviewed by Don Juan Amante
Reviewed on October 25, 2007
A touching write indeed.

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on October 25, 2007
Spooky stuff fresh from the cold cold heart of Halloween's muse. Love it.
Fee

Reviewed on October 25, 2007
This is chilling and sad SC.

Reviewed by Ann Scarborough
Reviewed on October 25, 2007
Yes, I prefer the night, the deepest part of the darkness. Undead but enchanting those who live into parting with that which keeps them alive. Loneliness I know well. You have intelligence beyond your years, Dahlink.
Love,
Evil Enchantress

Reviewed by Walt Hardester
Reviewed on October 25, 2007
Aw Hell, does this mean no nookie at the Ball?

?Walt?

Reviewed by stan nassano
Reviewed on October 25, 2007
sometimes we have to first pull our selves up,then crawl ,then baby steps,but if you can see the light,then there is hope.nice reflection on the plight of so many lonely souls,SC,
stan


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