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I Slip Away
by Southern Comfort → (All Poetry by Southern Comfort)
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Sometimes when life turns mean, my spirit will slip away to a sweeter place to dwell.

Amid your angey verbal attacks, I just sit mute with nothing to say,
My spirit flys to him and I just slip away.
While the loudness of your voice drones on, a fantasy is at play,
My body remains here, but my spirit has slipped away.
My spirit is safe within his loving arms,
Far away from the cruel words that harm.
I know I must look like one in a trance,
Truly demented, if someone would take a glance.
But my spirit is in a truly peaceful place,
I am with my true love and he is gently caressing my face.
You say that nothing about me pleases you,
I am as common to you as some old worn out shoes.
Though you have put away your passion for me, I still need,
My passion's fire is slowly dying, it has no fuel on which to feed.
I am sorry I have evolved into a woman, you hate,
You say the woman I am now is not your choice of a mate.
So when I get too sad here and life just plays,
I hear his gentle call and my spirit just slips away.

Music: Somewhere Out There
 

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 Reviews of "I Slip Away"
Reviewed on November 10, 2007
Love this and let it drift!
To Happiness SC!
All relationship NEED to a 2-Way Street to be real love!
WArmly, WArrior Gypsy Lady Sheeeoox

STay Positive!

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on November 1, 2007
Best thing to do, just slip away with the old spirits..
Love ya!
Ron

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on October 30, 2007
S.C.,

Everyone deserves to be happy my friend. Leaving the dirty laundry behind is your chance to find happiness. Blessings, Love and Peace to You Always, Paul.

Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten
Reviewed on October 29, 2007
I was once where you lie today...I slipped away for real, with fourteen little eyes looking up at me...if you get a chance, read my "Listen to the Whispers" ...and if you hear them sweet SC, heed their calling, God wants us all to be happy! :)
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~

Reviewed by Ann Scarborough
Reviewed on October 29, 2007
Oh Sissy! He can't see your beauty, he isn't worthy of you! Do slip away for real! I guarantee when you go, he will wonder what happened! Don't let him hurt you anymore! You are worth more than he will ever be worthy of. He puts you down to build himself up. Get rid of him. You will regain your life! I have a place you can stay.
Love,
annie

Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on October 29, 2007
SC do what you feel if he doesn't
treat you right then do slip away
You deserve it.

Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
Reviewed on October 29, 2007
Relatioships are a two-way street. Doesn't he see his culpability? Your defense mechanism is a good one.

Keep your chin up. God bless you.
Kathy

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on October 29, 2007
hey,, his loss,, I would say,, your gain too,,,, you are better than that.
Love, Christine

Reviewed on October 29, 2007
No one should live this way, time to slip away for real.

Reviewed on October 29, 2007
Slipping away could be fine when you do it physically to get out of danger. But when you slip away within yourself you damage yourself. Build some courage to change your life. Thanks
Abdi-Noor

Reviewed by stan nassano
Reviewed on October 29, 2007
Oh SC life should not be all misery,such a sad write,life should be more than just surviving,I hope someday you are able to thrive,
stan

Reviewed by Walt Hardester
Reviewed on October 29, 2007
Maybe he could fetch himself a new mate from the pig pen.

Walt

Reviewed by Ted Bossis
Reviewed on October 29, 2007
Trust your sense of beauty ~love Ted

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on October 29, 2007
SC, please walk away from all this pain. Just go out the door..Nothing is worth it, your sanity and health are more important. It is a great mechanism to be able to slip away, but it isn't a cure.
I wish you much Peace, Love, and Light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on October 29, 2007
Yip when life gets too unkind for me I do just this!!
I just slip away where my spirit is safe within loving arms,
Far away from the cruel words that harmed every core of me!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on October 29, 2007
To me you are a candle with a mean little flame that will never burn out and make the shadows tired of waiting to come in.
Georg


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