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Pain, The Reward For Softness
by Southern Comfort → (All Poetry by Southern Comfort)
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I come to you with arms open and the trust of a child, you reward my softness with pain.

My aqua, blue eyes are welled with tears, that spill over, hitting the ground,
My tears are your reward, your winning crown.
You smile, the victor has won the spoils,
My pain and humilation are the reward for your toil.
You revel in my quivering chin and trembling lips,
My tears signal victory as you hold me in cruelty's grip.
My crime, I wanted love and deep devotion,
I wanted to give you my love, it is deeper than the deepest ocean.
You have called me a silly heart, a romantic fool,
You find me childlike and so unschooled.
My feelings for you scare me, they are so strange and new to me,
Why must you always hurt me, I love you, just open your eyes and see!

Music: Cry Me A River


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 Reviews of "Pain, The Reward For Softness"
Reviewed on November 10, 2007
Be happy again!
I know these feelings too well,with my EX, glad he's gone, a happier ME is I, and you will be too, as you think of you.
YOur words express so much SC
WArmly, Warrior Gypsy Lady Sheeeoox

STay Positive!

Reviewed by Carolyn Wilson
Reviewed on November 1, 2007
Very honest. I easily sense your pain and humilation, and my heart breaks for you. I applaud your ability to be transparent and vulnerable, and to put accurately into words what most of us have at some point felt, and sadly it's that vulnerability that cruel men feed on. Thankfully you recognize it, and hopefully you have embraced and claimed your softness, and have grown to love yourself enough to have moved on. Love and best wishes

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on November 1, 2007
Nice and sad Sc..
Love ya much!
Ron

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on November 1, 2007
Sad theme, SC. I wish I could take your pain away. Take charge and take care. Love and hugs from B.C., Canada,

Regis

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on October 31, 2007
It Is really time to get out..Pain is not a good thing. I know this all too well..Just like Kathy, that was my first marriage, now I am happy, even though I am not in a relationship, it is a very beautiful time in my life. It is "Vee" time!! Embrace your beautiful soul and spirit, and fly SC, fly.
Peace, Love, and Light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
Reviewed on October 30, 2007
Sounds like a tribute to my first marriage. He figured it out way too late. I moved on and am incredibly happy.

Kathy

Reviewed by Ann Scarborough
Reviewed on October 30, 2007
He is a vampire, Sissy. Let him go find the sun! Let me know if everything is ok?
Love you.
annie

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on October 30, 2007
emotions stir in the pot,,soo confusing,,,Hope you are OK
Christine

Reviewed by Charlie
Reviewed on October 30, 2007
Most vampires feed off blood, but some feed off tears. BEWARE! --Charlie

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on October 30, 2007
Nothing scares more that sensing our feeling wanting to burst and we don't know what to do about it.
Nice one, can relate.
Georg

Reviewed by Ted Bossis
Reviewed on October 30, 2007
Of sensitive souls to be cherished forever~love Ted


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