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I'd Rather Be Your Child
by Southern Comfort → (All Poetry by Southern Comfort)
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For years I have given you loyalty and you have given me crap, so now I thinkin bout leavin yore sorry ass.

You always sink my dreamboat, never let me sail on a peaceful wave,
You keep me in a fog of confusion, while you rant and rave!
I hate bein yore wife, I'd rather be yore pampered child,
You always unload yore crap on me and give them yore silly smile.
When shit hits the family fan, it's always my shit,
All the rest of you are perfect, so I get jumped, it never quits.
Yore grown son, always gives you his extended hand,
You let him screw you over and he does it cause he can.
He is yore best pal and I am the resident Drama Queen,
I mostly can't stand you and yore spawn, you are a cruel tag team!
Well, Buck-o I am a professional clown and the Big Top is callin me,
You are gonna be so damn sorry, juat you want and see.



 

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 Reviews of "I'd Rather Be Your Child"
Reviewed by Silent Dream
Reviewed on November 11, 2007
Sounds like a very sad place to be. Expressed in your style and finesse. Sending ((Hugs and LOve)) ~yourDreamyGal

Reviewed on November 10, 2007
Time to move on!
GREAT STRONG POem SC!
Always! Follow the heart Southern GAl!
Warmly, Warrior Gypsy Lady Sheeeoox

STay Positive!

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on November 9, 2007
Oh oh...hope this isn't for real but if it is take your cute butt and big flower to a lawyer and let his son pay for it.

Fee

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on November 9, 2007
Hey girl!!! after you fell from that horse you need to come up and get on another, this time a wild mustang will do, no one of those sissy purebreed narcissist snobs.
Georg

Reviewed by chris stienstra (Reader)
Reviewed on November 8, 2007
Bravo! The freedom of re-birth and strength......
I hope many read this poem and feel the freedom I did.
My very best
Chris

Reviewed by Walt Hardester
Reviewed on November 8, 2007
I have to ditto sTinky's review.
F It...girlfriend..You are my Sissy and If'n you need me just holler.
You got my number and I am not far away....(seriously)...and you know I only say seriously when I mean it.

Walt

Reviewed by stan nassano
Reviewed on November 8, 2007
sorry things have worked out this way SC,you deserve better,
stan

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on November 8, 2007
That is tellin them turds SC
I will treat you like the
Queen of England..or better.
Yes, wipe yore ass from them two turds.
I'll send you some toliet paper.
Won't need much for dem two little turds.
Lovin hon,
Ron

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on November 8, 2007
A sad reality for many...not only women!!

Love Tinka


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