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She Don't Know
by Southern Comfort → (All Poetry by Southern Comfort)
   Rated "PG13" by the Author.
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I am her best friend and I have a secret.

She don't know where I've been,
I've been sleepin with her man, I'm her best friend.
She cries on my shoulder, thinks he cheatin,
He's cheatin all right and I'm the one he's meetin.
Am I sorry?, Hell no!
He loves me and she don't know.
She keeps her head in the clouds and nose in the air,
She is dumb, deaf and blind to this affair.
It is so damn easy, it's takin candy from a baby,
Her man is so hot, he drives me crazy!
She don't deserve him, she was just his pity stop,
He says that she's a joke in bed, a real flop!
He is mine for the takin, my toy,
He craves my body, it gives him total joy.
I have to order him to leave my bed,
Make him go home to her, for he wants me instead.
I might not even wants him for keeps,
But it is such a power trip, holdin her while she weeps.
Her man and I get a good laugh behind her back,
She is such a total loser, a real Sad Sack!
I give him a wild ride, I'm always on top,
I am always in command, I say when it will stop.
My hair is done to perfection, my make-up too,
I am every man's fantasy, have a killer bod and eyes of blue.
I am a biter, screamer and nipple twister,
I am a trip to Paradise, first class, Mister!
I make him scream my name, all night,
I keep him buried in me, good and tight.
She is kinda sweet, but dumb as dirt,
She don't know that her man's hand is always under my skirt.
Poor little fool, she is lucky to have me as her friend,
She doesn't have a clue to where I've been!

Music: Witchy Woman

    

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 Reviews of "She Don't Know"
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on July 28, 2008
Oh Damn....say no more!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on July 28, 2008
This poem although done with a sort of tongue in cheek attitude is all too real. The sad truth is also that often because of closeness of friends and time spent together that love for a friend's spouse does happen. It is not always mean spirited as in the case of this woman but often tears all three people apart in the triangle. No one wins but it doesn't stop them for love does not look to see who wears a ring.

Fee

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on July 28, 2008
Oh I know this really happens and have seen it through the years, shame when your best friend can slit your throat. As georg says so this is where the name Bitch comes from. Thank you for sharing SC.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on July 28, 2008
...and now we know from where that word "bitch" come from. But in that "menage a trois" one is getting nothing, it is not the time to make that threesome work?

Georg

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on July 27, 2008
Such shared betrayall and dishonesty, yet somehow I know this really happens and when one finds out it really hurts deeply for a very long time. Pretty fantastic writing....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on July 27, 2008
Among all the confidence and bravado there is a great deal of deep truth and honesty here and a re-examination of what a real friend is.
Very well said, SC.
John

Reviewed on July 27, 2008
Always loved Witchy Women! LOL
Good and tight is always right!
Love this poem, but sad to say SC! Their are women (Witchy for sure)
that do this to their friends, leads a sad world ahead...
Written 1st class too!
Good job in the writing style!
WRITE ON!
Warmest Blessings and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple Passion Lady Sheexooo

STay Positive!

Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on July 27, 2008
She don't know it, honey, but you done her a big-time favor.
That's what I call friendship. Yes'm. This is so well done.
-gene.

Reviewed by Janet Caldwell
Reviewed on July 27, 2008
Hi Sweets, I see your still a killer writer. Make them wonder.

Janet xoxoxo

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on July 27, 2008
Ah, such bad karma, what goes around, comes around...;) Ed


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