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The Favor
by Southern Comfort → (All Poetry by Southern Comfort)
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We are like sisters, we are best friends,
Because of this fact, is the reason this odyssey now begins.
Time was running out, I had found no mate, but I wanted to be a mother,
I love your husband dearly, he is my chosen brother.
You have seen my pain and held me as I did cry,
So you have consented to share your man and now in your bed we lie.
As you lie beside us, your face holds no fear, just trust,
You watch as we mate, it's just sex, without the passion and lust.
When it is completed, we leave the bed and the three of us embrace,
We vow to keep this secret, for fear of judgement, knowing others will think this in poor taste.
Hopefully, I will soon feel a new life growing in my womb,
Your unselfish love allowed my hope for a child to blossom and bloom.
Hopefully soon the joy of motherhood, I too can savor,
Thanks to your unselfish love and this very precious favor.

MUSIC: I Could Not Ask For More

  

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 Reviews of "The Favor"
Reviewed on November 10, 2008
Southern,

Beautiful my dear - simply beautiful!!


Hugs,

Lance

Reviewed by Tony Jenkins
Reviewed on November 9, 2008
Unconditional love.

A very rare Commodity.

Take care Tony

Reviewed by Kathleen McDonald
Reviewed on November 6, 2008
I don't know what to say about the beautiful and perfect love you have written about. To love unconditionally and share with complete trust is awesome. Love your write.
hugs
Kat

Reviewed on November 6, 2008
Now this is about as unselfish as sisterly love could get. Beautiful write SC.

Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on November 6, 2008
That is one fertile mind you have, Sweet Comfort.
And a most talented hand. -gene.

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on November 6, 2008
I read this twice and the more I thought about it the more I thought of what a wonderful and unselfish friendship these three must have shared to give the gift of life. Instead of a sterile test tube conception to be brought to life in the midst of three people who loved each other. I am not saying it is for everybody but I do know there are some that love that much that it would work. Wonderful mind opening write SC.
Fee

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on November 6, 2008
Wow, some FRIEND SC. I can't think of one person I would share my husband with, let alone be a witness to it. You must be a very special person for sure.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on November 6, 2008
...and then, the little rattle snake goes WHAM! ! ! and shakes you from your socks...

Georg


Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce
Reviewed on November 5, 2008
My hubby would not go for that. What a generous friend you have!!!

Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Bonnie May
Reviewed on November 5, 2008
What a favor and what a friend. I won't say anything about the husband for men are men. But what a friend...no way would I have been there, I would have gone and got a gun at the end. What a friend. You've come up with so many cliff hangers this takes the cake and plate too. Love and hugs, Bonnie


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