This is a semi-version of a horror story that the challenge was put out by William Bonilla.
I leave your imagination to fill in the gaps!
Please note:EVERYTHING THAT HAPPENED IN THIS STORY IS FALSE, FOR ONCE!
It was an ordinary house, on an ordinary block, with ordinary cars passing by.
Someone would come and mow the tall green weeds or ”green grass” as you northner’s would say!
Going thru the house, it seems ordinary. However, when you get to the kitchen, you hear, “The squeaks”! It sounds different, almost like a mouse! I open the dishwasher to see what is in there and………
I awoke in the hospital and During surgery no less! I screamed for my insides were being ripped out~! What the Heck is happening to me? Why cannot they hear me? It hurts so very bad! I want my Mommy! I want God!
It has been about eight weeks now. I am curious about the house and want to go back. Guess that is called ”Child’s Play”. Momma has forbid me to go over there anymore. I almost DIED.
Written on November 3rd,2004 at 5:03am CST by Becca E Henry, All rights reserved !
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Reviews of "The Squeak (William Bonillas Challenge)"
This makes me remember the little girl kidnapped in our area. They searched for her for three days. She was found alive and believe me it can happen. Then there was that child that outsmarted her captors. This is a warning and you did it so well.
A touching, loving and spirtual insight of the dying process, filled with peace, smiles and starting on their journey, taking me with them as far as I could go, returning back with something I didn't have before. Will be out early in 2010..on Kindle
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I didn' know what to thinks of, it other then
it scared me just to think you wanted to returned
Awesome write
William .....Peace & Love
Sandie May Angel