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The Squeak (William Bonillas Challenge)
by Rebekah Rosie Lang → (All Poetry by Rebekah Rosie Lang)
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This is a semi-version of a horror story that the challenge was put out by William Bonilla.

I leave your imagination to fill in the gaps!

Please note:EVERYTHING THAT HAPPENED IN THIS STORY IS FALSE, FOR ONCE!

It was an ordinary house,
on an ordinary block,
with ordinary cars
passing by.


Someone would come and
mow the tall green weeds or
”green grass” as you
northner’s would say!

Going thru the house, it
seems ordinary.
However, when you get to
the kitchen, you hear,
“The squeaks”!
It sounds different,
almost like a mouse!
I open the dishwasher to
see what is in there and………



I awoke in the hospital and
During surgery no less!
I screamed for my insides
were being ripped out~!
What the Heck is
happening to me?
Why cannot they hear me?
It hurts so very bad!
I want my Mommy!
I want God!

It has been about eight
weeks now. I am curious
about the house and want
to go back. Guess that is called
”Child’s Play”.
Momma has forbid me to go
over there anymore. I almost DIED.


Written on November 3rd,2004 at 5:03am CST
by Becca E Henry, All rights reserved !








 

 
 


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 Reviews of "The Squeak (William Bonillas Challenge)"
Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on November 3, 2004
great scary stuff here....Becca
I didn' know what to thinks of, it other then
it scared me just to think you wanted to returned
Awesome write

William .....Peace & Love

Reviewed by Pier Tyler
Reviewed on November 3, 2004
This is scary, like a child having a nightmare. Thanks for this fine write.

Reviewed by Sue Hess
Reviewed on November 3, 2004
scary

Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)
Reviewed on November 3, 2004
This makes me remember the little girl kidnapped in our area. They searched for her for three days. She was found alive and believe me it can happen. Then there was that child that outsmarted her captors. This is a warning and you did it so well.

Reviewed on November 3, 2004
Gosh! This is chilling. Hope it will never happen in real life.

Sandie May Angel


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