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As you pass by......
by Rebekah Rosie Lang → (All Poetry by Rebekah Rosie Lang)
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Working on a memory

 


As you pass by…..

You have achieved high status,
A Doctor you did become.
A protector and healer of man,
Shame on you,
for what you have done! 


She was a child in a
body of an Eighteen year old!

She took a chance and
confided in you!
You took that trust,
and smashed it into a
million pieces!

Only, she didn’t realize
it back then.

She adored you.

I have a few words
for you, but shall keep
them to myself!

Written by Rebecca (Becca) Lang on May 9th, 2005
at 6:58pm CST,DST. All rights reserved!


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Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on June 4, 2005
Just keep letting it out..
Sad can turn to happier.....

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on May 21, 2005
Thank you for sharing these honest thoughts, Becca. Love and peace to you. Regis

Reviewed by Janet Caldwell
Reviewed on May 20, 2005
Hi Becca,

So much comes to my mind, I was that girl at one time in the hands of a murdering doctor. It's taken me 22 yrs to forgive myself and him. Now I just pray blessings on all that have abused me in any way, In doing so, hot coals of fire shall be heaped on their head. It's not a bad thing.

Romans 12:17-21:
17 Recompense to no man evil for evil. Provide things honest in the sight of all men.
18 If it be possible, as much as lieth in you, live peaceably with all men.
19 Dearly beloved, avenge not yourselves, but rather give place unto wrath: for it is written, Vengeance is mine; I will repay, saith the Lord.
20 Therefore if thine enemy hunger, feed him; if he thirst, give him drink: for in so doing thou shalt heap coals of fire on his head. (this will actually help them by providing coal in their furnace, not literally on their head but it makes me happy to pray this way) ;)
21 Be not overcome of evil, but overcome evil with good.

Happy Summer-time, Janet xoxoxo

Reviewed by Marie Wadsworth
Reviewed on May 17, 2005
there are two sides of every coin. Just because they are a doctor, lawyer, teacher, etc. does not mean they can be trusted. You have to keep your eyes open. A person must prove he or she is worthy of your trust before it can be given. I can relate to this. I was sexually harassed in the military by a supervisor. I never reported him because of his status. Thanks for sharing this.

Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader)
Reviewed on May 12, 2005
Powerful memory and poem
Thanks Beccaxo
stay strong hope yer feeling well.
Tracey

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on May 11, 2005
The double hand of the doctor-patient bond-of-mutual-trust issue... so tricky to manoeuvre at the best of times, but often fraught with difficulty when it most needs to be straightforwardly in place! My heart breaks for both when things sadly go wrong. This happens so often by accident rather than design, but for those professionals who delberately break the moral code, then they perform an abuse of the hightest order. Powerful and emotive. Much clarity and yet a whole scenario with endless possibilities conveyed in your lines, Becca. TY Kate xx

Reviewed by Handsum Hart
Reviewed on May 10, 2005
This is so very sad,

Take care

Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)
Reviewed on May 9, 2005
Well I have a few things to say too and it is good to see you here. I called the other day and your sister answered been busy doing different things. Felt bad myself for a month but feeling better now.

Reviewed on May 9, 2005
Sad... :(

Reviewed on May 9, 2005
I have to agree with Karen's comment, and i echo to that it's very well done
God Bless
Michelle!

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on May 9, 2005
Sounds serious! I hope it helps, Becca! Well said!


Alrisha

Reviewed on May 9, 2005
sad and angry write; but very well done! :(


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