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Mr.W
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This is a poem about a certain man I have become friends with over the years when I was living in the state of Missouri. He is a good man. Something happened that I do not think I can forgive myself of but I am hoping he can forgive me. I have expressed it in this poem.
The wife and I became friends and therefore she told me what was going on with her.

Lost in Love,
The Two Souls
are now, One.
The Children are
born, and the
passion continues.

Along the way
of growing up
of children,
Suddenly She ,
your wife, blanked
out and became
fearful.
She was afraid and ill.


She latched on to
a dangerous man
and I did not STOP IT!

I hope you can
Forgive me.

Written March 2nd,2004 4:30pm
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 Reviews of "Mr.W"
Reviewed on March 14, 2004
This was sad and emotional. Well-expressed.

~ Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu ~

Reviewed by Mark Rockeymoore
Reviewed on March 9, 2004
:( of necessity, cryptic, yet clear as day. a neccesary write, poet.

Reviewed on March 9, 2004
This was so sad Becca,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Marie Wadsworth
Reviewed on March 7, 2004
Deep, Becca. But you can't blame yourself. You did what you could. Sometimes we make the right choose others the wrong ones -- all we can do is be there to laugh, cry, to love, support, and be a friend.
"Man must choose his own destiny, no one can choose it for him._ -- Princess Leia, Star Wars

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on March 7, 2004
So sad this one Becca.

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on March 7, 2004
Very sad and touching...perhaps
you wouldn't have been able to
stop her from what she was doing..
floria

Reviewed by Handsum Hart
Reviewed on March 7, 2004
Becca, I don't see were you did anything wrong to seek forgiveness for.

Best wishes

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on March 7, 2004
Yes this is intence, keep on keeping on...

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on March 6, 2004
Honest expression that elicits thinking from your reader. Thank you for this offering, Becca. Love and peace. Regis

Reviewed by Jane Rodway (Reader)
Reviewed on March 6, 2004
Wow! That is intense, really leaves images in one's mind. Sorry I have yet to email you back, I haven't been on much in ages, but I will write you soon because your email was really great:)


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