If Only (#2) (poem) by Amber V Moonstone on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on May 8, 2008

IF YOU HAD A CRYSTAL BALL AND COULD GIVE ME MY HOROSCOPE, WHAT WOULD IT BE? i AM A SCORPIO. i KNOW YOU WOULD BE TRUTHFUL AND RIGHT ON THE DOT CAUSE YOU HAVE SUCH SINCERE WRITINGS AND FEELINGS. Good poem afteral, you are No. 1 for me.

Reviewed by Larry Lounsbury

Reviewed on May 2, 2008

The light of truth shines in this beautiful work of art. It is quite amazing that we both wrote the same title on the same day. Our Muses must be related!

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on April 28, 2008

Truth and wisdom in this heartfelt piece. "If only" we had the power to erase alll the hurt and tears and feel the smiles in the sunlight, just heavenly beautiful...

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Barbara Smith

Reviewed on April 28, 2008

Amber, words from the heart and spoken in truth & sincerity...many will get a lesson from this one...great job!

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on April 28, 2008

This is a sweet write,, How many times do we say ,,"If Only"? Excellent Poem Amber.

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price

Reviewed on April 28, 2008

Yes. A crystal ball to show everything will be all right. Love this love reassurance poem. Excellent. Liz

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on April 28, 2008

IF ONLY ARE SAD WORDS.... WELL SAID THOUGH...

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on April 28, 2008

Very tenderly written with care and love. We can often wish for someone's life to change and for their freedom but the sad fact is only they can set themselves free. Freedom always comes with a price, often more than most are willing, or able, to pay. All we can do then is to offer our friendship, love and understanding.

hugs
Fee

Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope)

Reviewed on April 28, 2008

Amber this is for me and for many others like me. I stay alone in europe with my wife and children living in africa. Imagine

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on April 28, 2008

Talented and beautifully expressed
worthy of a response
Thank you for this heavenly Gem
Love & peace be with you

William

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on April 28, 2008

If only...you can imagine how your words go inside, like rain drops in a freshly ploughed soil...

Georg

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Reviewed on April 28, 2008

by Romantic Poetess Victoria L. McColley (author) at 4/28/2008 6:10:14 AM
Beautiful Morning To YOU Viv,
Your Words Are Beautiful & even the withered soul can find Hope & Faith In the Soul of Your Verses Here
a new rejuvenation of spirit & life :)
Love & Hugs Always
Embraced ~ Embrass�

(Vickie's review)

Reviewed by Morning Star

Reviewed on April 28, 2008

Beautifully writing and expressed message
Yes no one should stay in any situation
She/he are not happy with.
At times we all wish a crystal ball
would give us the answers
This is a beautifully writing and expressed words of
A very sad piece
wonderful message!!
Brilliant write!
Peace Love and Light...and Hugesss...Morning Star

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)

Reviewed on April 28, 2008

Oh my..If only...I love this..Excellent writing sweet lady..have a wonderful and safe day beautiful woman...Hugssssss

Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper

Reviewed on April 28, 2008

"If Only" we could all have a crystal ball that tells everything will be all right... Very thoughtful. Blessings.

Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G

Reviewed on April 28, 2008

"IF ONLY" is AWESOME! Special to a heart NOT KNOWING!
You speak so calmly and lovingly Viv! (Amber V)
I love the structure of this 'HOPEFUL' poem! I've been here, and If only, YOU would take the 1st. step needed, you would find a light at the end of that long dark tunnel!
Write On!
STay Positive!
STay STrong!
Warm BIG Hugs, Warrior Purple PaSSion Sheeeoxoooo
Enjoy! Your day Sis!
I see colors of pastels here, bringing clarity to a sad and lonely situation!