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Time To Wake Up
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It's about time to wake up.


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Time To Wake Up
by Amber "V" Mooonstone

3/19/10

Time to wake up,
cannot keep this going,
wanting to move forward
while fear is stifling my steps.

Always having positive thoughts
helping others through their life
why can I not help myself?
do I not feel worthy of my own help?

Walk into the light
to really see my storm
turbulent valleys
longing for pleasure peaks of happiness.

Wandering in the abyss of loneliness
takes a toll on the soul,
time to break loose
to find that glimmer of sunshine and hope.

Ascending the darkness
that shrouds my mind.
Awaiting the bridge that leads
to the other side.

Desperately clinging to life,
urging those steps that lead to
happiness and tranquility
to show me the way home.

Allowing the tender night
to embrace this lonely existence,
will lead to days of splendor
and fulfillment of desire and love.

Like the dolphin and the mermaid,
a perfect union of mind and soul
can be achieved with patience
and connectivity to the Universe's energy!


 


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 Reviews of "Time To Wake Up"
Reviewed by Ruth Gonzales (Reader)
Reviewed on March 27, 2010
I am very moved by this writing...You have a very powerful spirit, one that doesn't give up on well being. Life is like our sky you never know what picture it will paint. Sometimes it is a bright blue sky other times brings stormy skies or dusty winds even snowdrift or a beautiful rainbow after nice rain. In life it is similar. We have good times and bad times but it is the good ones we focus on and continue to grab on to. The bad ones only to remind us and make us realize the difference. That it doesn't matter what picture life paints at the time we can accept and expect for the next good thing thing.Your poetry is outstanding, will continue on the look for more. Your good spirit reflects in it. Thank you for sharing your beautiful talent... Best wishes.

Reviewed on March 22, 2010
Deeply emotive but still positive.

Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on March 20, 2010
I can relate to this, Amber. Sometimes we have to slow down and take a day for ourselves. You still ended this piece with a sense of positivity, though. Thanks for sharing this message!
Sheila

Reviewed on March 20, 2010
The flow of the poem and the wisdom dripping from its verses have a power to awaken millions of people around the globe and I am one of them. Thanks Amber


Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on March 20, 2010
So beautifully written Amber,and a wisdom message too!
Take your own advice and give yourself some loving care!
I send love light and happiness your way!
ET

Reviewed by J'nia Fowler
Reviewed on March 20, 2010
I am saddened by your poem. You speak to so many others who are alone, even those alone in a crowded room. I wish you God's peace and His joy. He created the universe for us to enjoy and us to enjoy Him as much as He enjoys us. Bless you, J'nia

Reviewed by Holly Ibbitson (Reader)
Reviewed on March 20, 2010
Wandering in the abyss of loneliness

takes a toll on the soul,



Indeed it does Amber... You have written

a heartbreaking poem.

Blessings & Peace, Holly

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on March 20, 2010
To rest one's head on eternity lap and go to sleep when being transported deeper and deeper in time, perhaps back to yesterdays beginnings or unfathomable futures...

Georg


Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on March 20, 2010
EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on March 19, 2010
good stuff to think about, well written and heartfekt

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on March 19, 2010
hi, Amber ... beautifully charged poem ...

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on March 19, 2010
You know something..you have just given the best advice of all...sometimes we just need to stop...reevaluate ...and give ourselves the tender loving care we would give another...heartfelt
big hug,
Christine

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on March 19, 2010
To help aid, give advice or be a friend to others is easy, to give ourselves the same advice, aid or even to like ourselves sometimes is not always easy. Good one Amber.
fee

Reviewed by Cela Shearer
Reviewed on March 19, 2010
A beautiful poem of love and struggle. And that peace and fulfillment will truly come.

Reviewed by Andy Turner
Reviewed on March 19, 2010
Maybe we can try to hard. Life has its natural path, we follow life's path and learn to take the correct road. And never the easiest road.

The is a vast diffo between being alone and loneliness.

Seya behind the bike-shed and I'll tell you all about it.

Reviewed by TONY NERONE
Reviewed on March 19, 2010
Amber anytime YOU want to just write to someone, write to me. I
found this well crafted piece lonely but serene. I am praying for you my friend.

GOD BLESS YOU
Tony

Reviewed on March 19, 2010
Amber,

Heartrendering poem about deep feelings Your last line says everything, mainly all is possible.

Mary

Reviewed by Don Juan Amante
Reviewed on March 19, 2010
loneliness is always a passing thing, a dark span between two bright paradises. well penned


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