Farewell (poem) by Amber V Moonstone on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on May 26, 2011

Amber, You have a heart full of gold. Even after the darkness you still wish him well. I didn't know you back then but I know you now and you are the light that shines so bright. Farewell to the past...Take care my sweet spirit sister! Hugs, Chessly

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on May 19, 2011

and so we do evolve, but, i get the bittersweet of it, too--well expressed!

Reviewed by TONY NERONE

Reviewed on May 18, 2011

A very fine writing, Viv. However you will always be loved by someone. I know because I am still alive.
Peace and Love
Tony

Reviewed by Sheila Roy

Reviewed on May 18, 2011

Thank you for sharing so deeply, Amber. First-class, Lady:)
Sheila

Reviewed by D. Vegas (Reader)

Reviewed on May 18, 2011

Amber, I believe letting go to someone you
vowed to love is one of life's hardest things.
Always,
Deborah

Reviewed by Andy Turner

Reviewed on May 17, 2011

Wham bam Amber wo.man, my ex has recently done the same thing, poor bloke.
He's history, her mystery. Time for fun fun fun.

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on May 17, 2011

Brave and honest poem Amber, I can understand how you feel,for whomever has loved,we cannot forget the experience,and lie about
our feelings, healing comes with truth! Well done!...ET

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on May 17, 2011

The past is always a part of us no matter what..new directions are there for us~we must take us where the wind blows.
Love and Blessings,
Christine

Reviewed by Gene Williamson

Reviewed on May 16, 2011

This poem is definitely you, Amber, a loving, caring,
talented human being with a future of your own to build
a happy life around. With love, gene.

Reviewed by Axilea MU

Reviewed on May 16, 2011

Your beautiful honesty is movingly revealed in these verses Amber. You are entitled to have memories... and to have a future too. Be well!

Axilea

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)

Reviewed on May 16, 2011

Lovely poem sweet lady....your heart is so beautiful...sighhh...stay safe and well...Hugss

Reviewed by Don Juan Amante

Reviewed on May 16, 2011

you share years and children, there will always be a place for him in your heart. Your heart is big enough and kind enough to still include him.

Reviewed by Liana Margiva

Reviewed on May 16, 2011

SAD AND BEAUTIFUL POEM!!!!!!!!!! WISH YOU HAPPINESS, AMBER!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by John Flanagan

Reviewed on May 15, 2011

Amber,
You ARE
Peace, Love and Lightness.

In admiration,
John

Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather

Reviewed on May 15, 2011

most people do not take the commitment to marriage litely, you are one. That's why you had the weekend you did. However, you used the word bitter/sweet. The weekend was sweeter than you think! Love, Morgan

Reviewed by Michael Guy

Reviewed on May 15, 2011

40 years is a long time, but of course the memories can seem like yesterday; the best part he left you: your daughter! You're a lucky gal no matter how you spin it...
To your bright future: michael xx

Reviewed by Connie Faust

Reviewed on May 15, 2011

As always, writing will help you to accomplish it. I think you were wise to write this poem. We can't erase memories, but we can put them in their place and move on.
Nicely written farewell--keep looking to the future.
Connie

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on May 15, 2011

You may say goodbye but no matter what he will always be a part of you...you can't say goodbye to memories, good or bad.
fee

Reviewed by John Bidwell

Reviewed on May 15, 2011

My ex-wife got engaged a month ago.
She called me to tell me about it...perhaps...because...
Who else cares about her?
But freedom is a never ending discovery.
Peace- deep peace.
John

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg

Reviewed on May 15, 2011

ya, I'm with Jerry on this...you haven't let it go...

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on May 15, 2011

Nope. You do not bid him farewell. He is still in your heart. I am sorry if what I said offends you, but your poem proved this truth, Amber.

Reviewed by Christine Tsen

Reviewed on May 15, 2011

This is an exquisite poem Amber, so tender, so personal, and full of your kindness and generosity of spirit.
Blessings, xx
Christine