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Let Me Hear The Rain
by Amber V Moonstone → (All Poetry by Amber V Moonstone)
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It has been incredibly hot this past week, rain where are you?


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 Let Me Hear The Rain
by Amber "V" Moonstone

7/15/13

Sedately walking through the corridors of my mind,
trying to grasp an ounce of rest
drinking in the taste of life
struggling to hear the rain.

Can there be relief in sight,
relishing comfort from just one drop
of nature's cool refreshment.
that longs to be felt at this very moment in time.

Mother Nature has been dry,
the solar heat unberablely radiant,
evening moonlight soothes your soul,
with gentle breezes as it lights.

When will the rain fall,
will it come today or not?
can I smile from fallen droplets
that quenches my longing thirst.

Torrid heat embodies lustful thoughts,
of times spent thinking of him,
to run in playful falling rain,
would then be relief once again!

 

 

"Let Me Hear The Rain" (c) Amber "V" Moonstone

 

 


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 Reviews of "Let Me Hear The Rain"
Reviewed by Portia Burton
Reviewed on September 28, 2013
so graphic!
-Portia

Reviewed by J. Roseline
Reviewed on August 2, 2013
Beautifully gently composed
The solar heat ,natures cool refreshment , absolutely brilliant, Amber dear, just carry on

Reviewed by Amor Sabor
Reviewed on July 25, 2013
We do much to escape the heat and it often leads us down a path of memories when the rain would come to wash away those uncertainties and the seemingly endless heat. Your write will make that day that the rains come that much more welcome.

Reviewed by Axilea MU
Reviewed on July 24, 2013
It has been incredibly hot here too, dear Amber... but there is more then one interpretation to this poem. Those corridors in your mind, that thirst, could be a longing for many things, maybe of spiritual nature.

It makes me like rain, but not for too long, as I live in a country with an endless, rainy winter!

Axilea

Reviewed on July 21, 2013
I am with you on this, heat lightning, no rain yet!

Reviewed by Kate Clifford
Reviewed on July 20, 2013
Not to worry the rain will come and it will be glorious when it happens. Good write.

Reviewed by D. Vegas (Reader)
Reviewed on July 18, 2013
It seems to rain when we do not want it and when we do ask for
it will not come.

Always,

Deborah

Reviewed by David Thompson
Reviewed on July 16, 2013
Lovely poem. Step into my world for a day or two. We've had enough rain to refresh your soul for days on end. Keep the faith; it will come in due time.

David Thompson

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on July 16, 2013
At least the heat reminds you of something good. What your poem reminds me of is an old song: “All day I face, a barren waste… without a trace… of water. Cool, clear, water.”

Ron

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on July 16, 2013
Absolutely beautifully composed
you always render onto your readers
what they expect of your poetic thoughts
love and peace be with you

William

Reviewed by Shirley Long
Reviewed on July 15, 2013
Such a lovely poem. It has been raining nearly everyday here. I know how it feel to be hot and humid also. Good write about the rain.

Reviewed by Dark Knight
Reviewed on July 15, 2013
it is really hot where I am Amber as well tho it does make me want to write some even hotter poetry--loved your poem

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
Reviewed on July 15, 2013
Nicely done, Amber...it's been really hot and dry here for the past 2 weeks...wouldn't mind a few raindrops right about now...

Anna

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on July 15, 2013
Maybe you should relocate to the swamp where I reside, Amber. We get at least one shower, sometimes hard rain daily, usually in the afternoon. If you can't relocate, then I'm hoping you get some of the wet stuff s-o-o-n . . .


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