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Is It Wrong?
by Marissa M Couchon → (All Poetry by Marissa M Couchon)
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I miss her so much.

Is it wrong for me to want more?
Wrong to more want than a few days a year?
Is it wrong to want you so much more?

Familial obligations take us away
I know this is so and I do undertand
But is it wrong for me to want you to stay?

I love you and Miss you
with my heart, body and soul
From what I can tell you feel it too

I want to say just take me away
but I know thats not possible
and that you'll never stay

Although I may want to I'll never ask you to stay
I wish as you leave I was going with you
I'll never do anything to hurt or stand in your way

As much as it kills me a little each time
I will keep you forever in the warmth of my heart
As I pray for the day you will someday be mine

I know it's not just yours but my family too
and one day we'll fix it so we'll both be happy
till then my Love remember I Love you too

I just have to ask just one little thing
If you dont mind my asking
Is it wrong for me to want everything?


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 Reviews of "Is It Wrong?"
Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen
Reviewed on February 3, 2012
A great 'line-all-piece', Marissa, meaning all first lines in each verse coagulate,and each again, adding the same to the whole piece. All lines in your piece can be read a second way, line ones all,

Wrong to
I know
with my heart
but I know
I wish as you leave
I will keep you
and one day
If you don't mind
then lines two..

Enjoyed, we all are everything so really badly..

Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen


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