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Clang Softly
by pat medlin → (All Poetry by pat medlin)
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I bounce off of you
As two pipes on a chime
Trying to follow yor note
At times... forgetting mine

Strivng to keep your beat
Yet never quite in step
Always in between
Pleasing and inept

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "Clang Softly"
Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on May 23, 2010
...and softly sounds taken by the wind...

Georg


Reviewed by Paul Judges
Reviewed on May 23, 2010
Very nice short poem, Pat

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
Reviewed on May 22, 2010
I bought a musically tuned chime to solve that problem. The notes are perfect. The beat depends on the wind. You can never be in stride. Never be in step. But always pleasing. Patrick

Reviewed by Dayvid Graybill
Reviewed on May 22, 2010
Very nice! I sometimes know the feeling. Good write!

Peace,
Dayvid

Reviewed by D Johnson
Reviewed on May 22, 2010
Wonderful little poem, and be sure, your writing style is certainly not inept.

Cheers,
Dan


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