Zigging Without A Line (poem) by pat medlin on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on July 21, 2013

Even the best of us create our own words and silly rhymes sometimes. (Thank you Dr. Seuss.) What fun! M.True

Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse

Reviewed on July 21, 2013

Zag A Riffic!!
tip toes & tulips

Word Preeners & Dancing Plumes
Vickie

Reviewed on March 15, 2013

I like word play as well-well pat I think what you have written here is like me sometimes-I have thrown away some paper only to go back to it and go Hmmmm-well done

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on March 9, 2013

A fun write to read Most enjoyable
thank you for sharing
Love & Peace be with you

William

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on June 8, 2012

I love word play. You have done well, Pat. Thank you for sharing your wit and humor. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by Duke LaRance

Reviewed on May 30, 2012

Very well done...even if one tried to explain art (poetry) to a Philistine, he would still be a Philistine. I'm glad that I'm one of the lucky delirious ones....

duke larance ~ the drugstore cowboy poet
Muskodayn Bishkikee Ziishib

Reviewed by Joy Hale

Reviewed on May 13, 2012

Many chuckles over this fanciful zig zaggy poem of delight! I thoroughly enjoyed your offering, Pat. More, please?

Joy L. Hale

Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather

Reviewed on May 9, 2012

I like this, although you put it under mainstream, I see kid poem, One child always tring to cross the line and the other wouldn't think of it....well I guess that could apply to about any two people come to think of it. anyway, I had very specific little people in mind when I read this. :)

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila

Reviewed on May 8, 2012

How wonderfully lively and fun!!! Well done, Pat!!!

Anna

Reviewed by D. Vegas (Reader)

Reviewed on May 7, 2012

Pat, A delicious and breath of fresh air poem!

Always,
Deborah

Reviewed by Christine Tsen

Reviewed on May 6, 2012

Irrepressibly unique and sonic and rich in imagination!
Blessings,
Christine

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on May 6, 2012

I jig with a line� But there are those who can zig or zag if they wish with or without a line, as long as they are being farcical in the process. At least until they run out of time. ;-)

Ron

Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger

Reviewed on May 6, 2012

Punctual piddle-do's... forever ryhming with time.
Whimisical zig upon zag !! Hilarious ! Pat

Lady Mary Ann

Reviewed by John Flanagan

Reviewed on May 5, 2012

i loved Sandra's, 'Pedal, Antoinette'
and i love this - they share a certain 'madness'
that's witty and so so clever and insightful
without being in the slightest preachy or boring

yes, Pat!

john

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors

Reviewed on May 5, 2012

Inventive word perdacious. Coupled with piddle I had to check my fly for damp spots because ya just never know. I prefer zagging to zigging but that's just me. What I really used to like was zig-zag, a handy tool of the 70's that I outgrew but sometimes wonder why. Patrick

Reviewed by Richard King

Reviewed on May 5, 2012

That line you don't have,,,,, Well, it must have had a hook on it, cause you certainly reeled me in. Dick

Reviewed by Lonnie Hicks

Reviewed on May 5, 2012

Sooo funny and creative. Goodness.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton

Reviewed on May 5, 2012

I'm dizzy. I say I am dizzy. But I made it through the minefield of tongue twisters with hardly a scratch. But I'm dizzy.

Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci

Reviewed on May 5, 2012

It's like you're darned if you do and you're darned if you don't! Well put!! Thank you! I had to chuckle!!

Jane

Reviewed by Amor Sabor

Reviewed on May 5, 2012

Very much enjoyed this clever write, Pat