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The Moon & A Thought
by Steve Patterson → (All Poetry by Steve Patterson)
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The Moon & A Thought
by Steve Patterson



Sunday, March 31, 2002


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last night as i sat in a seat on the sandy shore,
i gazed at the night across the lonely sky.
the waves on the bay were ever at play.
their soft whispers heard in the night,
haunting my thoughts, haunting my mind.

the day was ready to pass on to yesterday.
then to my surprise a gentle light broke through the sky.
in only a moment the moon opened it's eye.
as it rose over the bay, it's soft light brightened
the end of the day.

but then, as if in sync,
the moon hid it's light behind some clouds.
and in that moment the loneliness returned to my alone.
memories of long past moons shadowed the light in my heart.
in that part of me that knows such thoughts and feels such feelings it grew gray.

at that moment, that second in time,
the moon cleared the clouds, a thought came to mind.
as the moon's light brightened the sky,
that single thought brought light to my night.
the loneliness passed from my alone.

and as that day drew to a close,
passing forever in to the yesterdays,
that single thought was of tomorrow,'
which now is today.
that thought was a thought
of you. and i smiled.



Copyright ©2002 steve patterson


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 Reviews of "The Moon & A Thought"
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on October 15, 2005
Me too, Steve. I smile when I think of "someone" I know and love. Well done. Love and peace.

Regis

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on October 14, 2005
Steven this is most definitely one of you best pieces "emotional" wise...the imagery the feel of it everything just spoke to me!!

Thanks for re-posting this...Love it!!

And you said "this" is not "collaborable" enough?

Anyways...thanks for you screamingy funny review...funny enough I was expecting that kinda review from someone....not telling who...ot I might just get trouble!!

Oh yeah good morning from a still almost dark but moonlit South Africa!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on October 14, 2005
I love the theme and how you interwove the light and dark and the alone thoughts with those of her. Lovely work...

Eileen

Reviewed on October 14, 2005
Hi Steve:

This is nicely-written with wonderful sentiments. Good job!

Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)


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