the was no rhytmn
guess that's a given'
guess that's livin'
now it's lost
now it's only a cost
to be paid
layed
ta' rest
didn't pass the test
of time
guess there was no rhyme
just a gone
a sad song
it's all in the game
it's all the same.
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Reviewed by Oisín Breen (Reader)
Reviewed on March 4, 2003
I'm sorry for your pain.
I understand where you come from. I have written from this perspective however it is not appropriate for me to say good or not etc. as it is your own reflections let out to the world. So I wish you much metta(loving kindness) and hope you find yourself well in the morning
... been there; but for me, pain has given me the reward of poetry.
Reviewed by the phantom pheonix (Reader)
Reviewed on March 4, 2003
sadness in stark nakedness this was beautifully emotionally awesome job the pain though will be there but you have to find a way to move on i know not easy at all
Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on March 4, 2003
Steve I never experienced this type sadness so I cant speak of it..but I do feel for you..this is sad..know that tomorrow the sun will shine again...and your friends will still be your friends..Floria
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I understand where you come from. I have written from this perspective however it is not appropriate for me to say good or not etc. as it is your own reflections let out to the world. So I wish you much metta(loving kindness) and hope you find yourself well in the morning