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whata' i want
by Steve Patterson → (All Poetry by Steve Patterson)
  
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whata' i want?

i want love

i wanta' woman who'll dance with me
who'll let me be
who i be
& let me see
what she
want's ta' be
but who'll dance with me
all night long
who'll hear my song
my poem
my rythmn
my rhyme
who'll be in step with my time

she'll drink beer & play pool
like this old fool
'till the bar closes
or the sun comes up
then see the roses
and smile & kiss me

at six at night
she just might
cook me breakfast
eggs, sausage & bicits
then risk it

goin' out again tonight

doin' the same old thing
havin' a fling
doin' thing

just lovin me
like i love her

thats for sure

thats what i want
that's what i'd like

at least tonight

if i may if i might
that's the love
that'd be outta' sight

yeah

that's what i want

at least tonight




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 Reviews of "whata' i want"
Reviewed by Kay P Devenish
Reviewed on June 6, 2003
That sounds delightful.
Your poem really made me smile.it was fresh,open, honest and musical too...just like you.

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson
Reviewed on June 6, 2003
Great strong poem, Steve! Bravo!

Reviewed by Donna Maris
Reviewed on June 6, 2003
I LIKED THIS- LADIES ARE OUT AND DOIN THEIR THING TOO!

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on June 6, 2003
Hey that is very good!!!
Peggy


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