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Drowning of Thirst
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Drowning of Thirst

Heated words said,
Burning within, she thirsts,
Shoulders weighted,
Drowning in a seabed.

9-27-08


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 Reviews of "Drowning of Thirst"
Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on August 7, 2009
WELL DONE... WITH FEW PHRASES AND CLEAR IMAGERY - ENJOYED. THANKS FOR SHARING AND BLESSINGS. JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Reviewed by Emile Tubiana
Reviewed on March 1, 2009
Christine, No one should thirst for love or for water. God bless and quench the thirst. Love Emile
Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain
Reviewed on November 11, 2008
Christine,

Crisp and fresh . . . excellent!!


Best wishes,

Lance
Reviewed by Mary Patterson
Reviewed on October 23, 2008
Very touching , filled with hopelessness and dispair....M
Reviewed by Axilea MU
Reviewed on October 8, 2008
Lovely oxymoron.
Nice and effective.

Axilea
Reviewed by Michelle Mead
Reviewed on October 1, 2008
This picture really works with your poem-you've made it so we can feel her, if that makes sense, lol. Good work.
Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on September 28, 2008
Dispair and solitude brings about a need to break free and live life as it should be lived, few words, deep meaning....

Be always safe,
Karen
Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on September 28, 2008
Quite a powerful little poem, Christine.
Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on September 28, 2008
...that's when we can't put the genie back inside the brass oil-lamp.

Georg
Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on September 28, 2008
Deep and powerful in so few lines, Christine. Wonderful photo to go along with this!
Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on September 27, 2008
wow! pic and poem are well mated! Exceptional!

luv,
et
Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on September 27, 2008
Christine, great depth of expression and meaning in such a short piece.
John
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on September 27, 2008
Succinct but very powerfully expressive, Christine. Many will relate. I know I do. Love and best wishes,

Regis
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Reviewed on September 27, 2008
An entire range of emotions in thirteen words: excellent, Christine!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle
Reviewed on September 27, 2008
You have created a great poem with few words.I love it,take care

Edwin
Reviewed by Glen Schulz
Reviewed on September 27, 2008
Terribly sad. Christine you never cease to amaze and impress me. I wish I had such ability; to say so much with so little. Blessings from Texas, *Glen*
Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on September 27, 2008
this is such an original thought -- a skillful write Christine -- God bless -- JMW
Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on September 27, 2008
Wow I read on and on within your few words Christine. Thank you for sharing.

Newfie Hugs, Rose
Reviewed by Darryn Murphy
Reviewed on September 27, 2008
well done i like it
Reviewed by Denise Edwards
Reviewed on September 27, 2008
alot said in so few words. well done
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on September 27, 2008
Much behind the lines here . . . Very nicely done, Christine . . .
Reviewed by Ted Bossis
Reviewed on September 27, 2008
Spiritual sponges never ending.~.evol Ted
Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on September 27, 2008
Outstanding sweet lady...well done indeed...love the picture as well... have a wonderful and safe day....Hugsss
Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on September 27, 2008
The combination of picture and your special word feelings moved me deeply, I could read a whole story in them four lines, my imagination took hold and I could picture a sea Captain's farewell to leave this siren of the deep broken hearted. Lovely indeed Christine but then again I would expect nothing less from you.
hugs
Fee
Reviewed by Bonnie May
Reviewed on September 27, 2008
Wow, this is so emotional with so few words. Beautiful, amazing picture and your words are a Masterpiece. Love, Bonnie
Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on September 27, 2008
Christine, I just love this, simplicity and depth. You can see the emotions that you write about in this amazing photo..Well done.
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
Reviewed on September 27, 2008
Short, succinct, simple. PERFECT!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
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