Tear (poem) by Christine Alwin on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on August 13, 2009

Absolutely lovely! Wonderful picture...perfect for your verse.

Anna

Reviewed on August 12, 2009

A beautiful image.

Reviewed by Jms Bell

Reviewed on July 6, 2009

BEAUTIFUL! YOUR FEW WORDS SPEAK VOLUMNS ABOUT HOW EMOTIONALLY PAINFUL 'LOST DREAMS' CAN BE. THANKS FOR SHARING AND BLESSINGS. JOYCE

Reviewed by ~ H (Reader)

Reviewed on June 10, 2009

Beautifully done!

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on May 25, 2009

you write the most beautiful short poems
Love & peace

William

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)

Reviewed on May 20, 2009

Oh my, very beautiful writing sweet lady as always..stay safe and well..Hugsss

Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle

Reviewed on May 20, 2009

Very powerful and thought provoking piece.take care

EDWIN

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on May 19, 2009

succinctly sad .... quite effective ...

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price

Reviewed on May 19, 2009

Oh, just out of grasp and then gone. Sad but too often true. Love it. Liz

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Reviewed on May 19, 2009

Christine, I don't know how I missed this lovely poem. Sometimes tears are good and full of joy. (We will cry tears of joy when we see each other soon!)
Much peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on May 18, 2009

sad but lovely description

Reviewed by Gene Williamson

Reviewed on May 18, 2009

Christine, I suppose it is not uncommon that
sugar-coated dreams dissolve easily. Still:
sadness. Briefly and beautifully done. -gene.

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Reviewed on May 18, 2009

I have shed a few of those lonely teardrops. Thank you for sharing words that speak loud and clear Christine.

Newfie hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on May 18, 2009

Quite powerful, Christine.

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson

Reviewed on May 18, 2009

Christine, often times, it's that one single tear that says so much more than a river full. Few words that touch the heart in a powerful way.

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on May 17, 2009

A lonely tear has more sadness than a bitter weeping.
Three lines that convey all.

Georg

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on May 17, 2009

Perfect! Well done; brava, Christine!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. ;D

Reviewed by John Flanagan

Reviewed on May 17, 2009

Christine,
Poignant, sharp and insightful.
John

Reviewed by Jon Willey

Reviewed on May 17, 2009

when our grasp was too late or too little -- and the sweetness of love turned into a tear not to be approached by the heart -- lovely,lovely poem, sweet and sad -- peace and love my friend -- Jon Michael

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on May 17, 2009

I sense a deep sadness in this write, Christine. I pray that I'm wrong, but if I can be of any help at all, please, let me know. Either way, this is a heartfelt write for certain. God bless.

Reviewed by Cindy Tuttle

Reviewed on May 17, 2009

Christine, this touches the deep part of our hearts.You expressed this so well and you did so with just a few words. That is all you needed. Everything is there. It is complete. Wonderful!

With Love,
Cindy

Reviewed by Sunny Serafino

Reviewed on May 17, 2009

Another thought provoker. Beautiful by then your poems always are and the accompanying art is so good.

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on May 17, 2009

Powerful impact in few words - reaches out and grabs the reader by the heart - well done, Christine.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on May 17, 2009

There is a pain or perhaps deep dissappointment in this one, as if a hope was offered and then taken away. You expresses such deepness of emotion with this one that it did make my heart feel an ache of sadness.

hugs
fee