Airborne (poem) by Christine Alwin on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on June 9, 2010

a lovely piece Christine
Peace & love be with you

William

Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse

Reviewed on April 28, 2010

Christine this is so awesome!!
Truly wonderful perspectives!
Love's Bounty
Vickie

Reviewed on April 25, 2010

Christine, your exacting selection of verbiage unleashes a plethora of images -- it compels one to utilize their imagination, and then it becomes so clear -- suggestive and promising hope -- all with a leap of faith, though grounded -- quite a haiku my friend -- peace and with you -- Jon Michael

Reviewed by Jms Bell

Reviewed on April 24, 2010

PROFOUND STATEMENT! SOMETIMES...IT TAKES THE WINDS FROM A CALAMITY...TO LIFT US UP...TEACHING US TO SOAR. WELL DONE AND ENJOYED. I WILL KEEP THIS ONE. LOVE AND BLESSINGS,
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Holly Ibbitson (Reader)

Reviewed on April 19, 2010

Sounds like a determined one.. blessings, Holly

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on April 19, 2010

and Superwoman was born! :)) Never forget your red cape, Christine! I really like the leap of faith this write takes... it covers the ground of a whole novel in the space of three deft lines... then blows it clean away! AND HAPPY BIRTHDAY! xx

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on April 19, 2010

Lovely picture, and beautiful write!

Happy Birthday Christine!!

Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Douglas Bentley

Reviewed on April 18, 2010

This flows together
When hit with pain - you manage to get through it.
Ending up in the wide open skies.

Reviewed by Handsum Hart

Reviewed on April 18, 2010

Very inspirational

Best wishes

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila

Reviewed on April 18, 2010

Nicely done, Christine.

Anna

Reviewed by Sheri Uy

Reviewed on April 18, 2010

Sometimes we need to be knocked down and grounded to realize the importance of 'flying light', and one is to leave 'unwanted baggage' behind... So fly light, Chrissie and continue to shine.

Lovelovelove,
Sheri

Reviewed by John Domino

Reviewed on April 18, 2010

There is "Hope" in your poem!

Love & Blessings to you and your family,

John Michael Domino

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on April 18, 2010

A wall is always better than flying on a spider's web...

Georg

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on April 18, 2010

Sounds like a painful flight.

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Reviewed on April 17, 2010

wow this poem packs a punch! Flight of fancy or flee of flight? Either way, sometimes being grounded and being flighty can go hand in hand...
Much peace, love, and light,
Amber

Reviewed by John Flanagan

Reviewed on April 17, 2010

One of those strange words, 'airborne' and yet one of my favourites, Christine, it's so compact in meaning and suggestion as are the lines it's title to. This I like!

John

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on April 17, 2010

An impactful haiku, Christine; I love the way it ends. To me, it points to hope and freedom. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on April 17, 2010

This sounds very deep, Angel. God be with you.

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on April 17, 2010

All too often the easiest way is flight but in the long run when run we leave the best part of ourselves laying broken on the ground. I can feel your heart in this one Chrissie...
hugs
fee