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Revealing Thoughts
by Christine Alwin → (All Poetry by Christine Alwin)
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Revealing Thoughts

Her thoughts stripped naked,
revealed, to the gulls and crabs,
why could he not see?

 

 

 

 


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Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on October 1, 2010
So much meaning expressed so concretely; very powerful, Christine. For me it would be, "Why could she not see?" I find this very relevant. Thank you. Love and best wishes to you,

Regis

Reviewed on August 28, 2010
A beautiful picture to compliment but, you said it best. Beautifully -Morgan

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on August 27, 2010
Christine, this says so, so much...beautifully written...and so much said in so few words...I'm saving this one.

Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on August 20, 2010
MY THOUGHTS ARE...BECAUSE HE DOESN'T WANT TO SEE HER THOUGHTS STRIPPED NAKED...HE WANTS TO SEE HER THOUGHTS LIFTED HIGH; THEN IF HE STILL DOESN'T NOTICE...HE'S BLIND...MOVE ON. I LOVED THIS CHRISTINE, QUESTIONS ALWAYS MAKES ONE STOP AND THINK OF AN ANSWER. WELL DONE AND ENJOYED. THANKS FOR SHARING, BLESSINGS AND LOVE,
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on August 18, 2010
selective vision or inherent blindness depends solely on who's looking ...

Reviewed by Andy Turner
Reviewed on August 18, 2010
Martians can't read minds, conveniently!

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on August 16, 2010
A painful situation, Christine, dealt with with such precision and delicate heartfulness. It is sad when our nearest and dearest are actually those who are furthest distant in terms of would-be/should-be shared emotional or spiritual intelligence. Very felt and actualised. Bless you. xx

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on August 15, 2010
A fantastic write Christine
a great picture compliments
your wonderful thoughts
Love & peace be with you

William

Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on August 15, 2010
Christine, you leave no doubts as to what reveling is all about Attention and perception. Love this thought my dear friend. May peace and love and joy be with you. Jon Michael

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
Reviewed on August 15, 2010
Enchanting! The picture springs to life with your words! Great job, Christine!

Anna

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on August 15, 2010
love both pic and poem! Some are blind to what's right in front of them.I put it down to lack of truly caring...

Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Reviewed on August 15, 2010
Maybe his didn't see because if he looked he would have to acknowledge his true feelings...

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on August 15, 2010
Our human blindness can be very detrimental.

Reviewed by Douglas Bentley
Reviewed on August 14, 2010
He must have been busy looking elsewhere
Which is tragic.
Since she had bared all.
Down comes the curtain call.

Reviewed on August 14, 2010
this poetic expression
so beautifully undresses
into love's heart...
whispering..I hope he hears

Sandy Toes
Vickie

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on August 14, 2010
Most of the time because he could only see as far as himself. Speaking from experience here.

Reviewed by Walt Hardester
Reviewed on August 14, 2010
Is it possible he couldn't see because he was only concerned about himself, and not sensitive to anyone's but his own?

~W~

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on August 14, 2010
The eternal question of why one party or the other fails to realize the others love even when expressed with conviction. Time to move on, the boat has sailed.

Reviewed by David Maclellan
Reviewed on August 14, 2010
There's not much more that I can add to felix's comments, I think he sums it up perfectly. So much said in just three lines!

Best wishes,
David

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on August 14, 2010
I read this last night, and reread again this morning and it feels like a yearning for understanding and yet as amber suggested perhaps he sees and feels more than she thinks. When two people love each other they both become a little vunerable. The need for reassurance and assurance is needed by everyone...this is intense Chrissie but one of your best.
fee

Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Reviewed on August 14, 2010
This is awesome!
Hmmm...Maybe he had built a wall around himself, and so he couldn't see that she had changed? This is powerful ~ a susurrus of sorrow and frustration!
Blessings and Joy to you,
Christine

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on August 14, 2010
Perhaps a failure to bond, Christine, an unwillingness to commit. How well you put it.

John

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on August 13, 2010
Sometimes one may be blinded by commitment or duty. Sad and well written, Angel.

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on August 13, 2010
Silence is golden, but when we want to be heard it is annoying..Sometimes we think they are not listening, but in reality they are, but care not to acknowledge what we are trying to say..

So few words, spark my thoughts and done with much humility..

Much peace, love and light to you dear spirit sister,
Amber

Reviewed by Dayvid Graybill
Reviewed on August 13, 2010
Good question. Maybe he was just another guy who can't stand the silence.

Peace,
Dayvid


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