He asked me to write him a love poem,
how do I scribble the words,
to tell him that he is my poem,
editing, there is no need,
he sings of cherry blossoms,
chants tales ofthe sea,
a reflection frosted, in laughter’s tear,
yes, my treasured poem,
tis love that shall remain,
the foundation, beneath my feet,
that gives me strength, day by night,
so take this now….run with it,
it is yours for keeps,
never to be written in sand nor stone
Christine, you show depth of creativity and imagination here that is worthy of appreciation by every poet. It is the essence of a poetic moment, the muse. Love and peace to you my dear friend. Jon Michael
AHHHH...WHAT MORE COULD YOU SAY? THERE'S REALLY NOTHING ELSE...
TIME AND TIME AGAIN IT AMAZES ME HOW THAT WONDERFUL THING CALLED LOVE CAN GO ENTER INTO THE HEART AND BRING FORTH THE WORDS THAT CANNOT BE MISTAKEN FOR ANYTHING BUT EROS' PURE, SWEET OILS... OVERFLOWING. DONE SO WELL, CHRISTINE. THANK YOU FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS & FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Again, having just read Fee's darling response, you have nut-shelled the essence of the preceeding lines in the final three: I love the images of love that you have chosen to represent your "poem" but the truth is that he is a poem of words that are forever grafted onto the skin of a heart that is free to run and to be kept safely within - and for always! A Sonnet Of Shakespearean Love if ever there was one, Christine! Truly beautiful, xx
Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
Reviewed on September 27, 2010
I really love these shorty poems which deliver maximum effect with the minimum amount of wording. There's a real art to that, a balancing act. And you just nailed it perfectly.
I felt this one with all of my senses...felt the warmth of your love, felt the devotion, felt the togetherness,felt eternity and so much more. Poetry like this can only be written for people who we truly hold dear to our hearts and the man who you wrote this for is definately one lucky guy. Never stop believing Christime for dreams do come true...
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fee
Christine, this is so beautiful and you have expressed yourself so well. It's so difficult to write a poem at times when someone has asked you too...this is lovely.
I love this. I can completely relate to what you express. I think the intended recipient of your sentiments is fortunate, Christine. Love and best wishes,
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Axilea
the way I'd like to write. -gene.
Peace,
Dayvid
As it says "a heart full of love will never die." Love Emile
TIME AND TIME AGAIN IT AMAZES ME HOW THAT WONDERFUL THING CALLED LOVE CAN GO ENTER INTO THE HEART AND BRING FORTH THE WORDS THAT CANNOT BE MISTAKEN FOR ANYTHING BUT EROS' PURE, SWEET OILS... OVERFLOWING. DONE SO WELL, CHRISTINE. THANK YOU FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS & FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Carole~
What a beautiful poem, one that your man will treasure forever.
Mary
of such a beautiful love
and tenderness...lovingness...
and your closing line...SIGHhhhhhh....gorgeous
Love's Bounty Embracing
Vickie
Anna
Such a wrap-around feel to this, warm and comforting
and very finely expressed.
John
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fee
GOD BLESS YOU
TONY
I like.
(thou sometimes the hardest poem to write is one that is requested.)
Regis