Genius!

crying in commas
lovers
become the
semicolon moments

This poem is creative and very cleverly conconcted, John. Congratulations! Love and peace to you,

Regis

Interesting. I like the format setup.....M

Who would have thought that one word at a time says so much. Great poem, food for thought my intelligent friend. Love, Bonnie

Finely punctuated personification.

" I lost my Grammar once...." Groucho Marx

Ron

I aspire to craft the written word as well as you.

be well and happy,
Kathy

Exceptionally done write~`*

John,
here I am...reading your absolutely overly intelligent words on a subject that I am very weak on. Loved every word of it. Beautifully penned. You are a wonder.
Tina

"you--a noun become pronoun in my life"
I love the words and the flow of this poem. Aloud, it becomes music.

Very impressive word jazz, John. I am vaguely reminded of famous Beat Era creative personality Ken Nordine (among his most well known works, 'WORD JAZZ', found on LP and tape). Nordine was a master of creating moods and setting with a style borrowed directly from the jazz scene. Gary Snyder also ventured into those areas on occasion ('RIP-RAP' and others), but your own approach is both refreshing and unique. It hits the skin, John, it hits the skin! Creatively clever as well as sonorifically playful, but not to the point where it overwhelms your intent and submerges it in vats of amorphous semantic miasma. Kudos! Most enjoyable.
-Kalikiano

wow
love it

crying in commas
lovers
become the
semicolon moments
within
held marks

hit me with a hammer, I never was that good at grammar, infact I started to spell it, G R A M M E R. BUT i DON'T LET IT STOP ME jOHN.
COOL

You caught my full attention on this one, John. Beautiful and interesting.

Be well,
Sheri

This appeals very much to my split participle, grammar queen essence. Kudos. --Charlie

"crying in commas - semicolon moments" - glad you didn't use any - You've been reading anessa lately haven't you? I loved this - refreshing change of pace - works great (!) oops... (bad punctuation habits die hard (i'll resist)
PS: 40-41 (not that i'm keeping track)

Now your talking my language, except I never thought of relating the rules with loving, free style...somehow, you put it all together and I LOVED IT! :)
Take a bow, dear sir~
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~

Interesting write John, love holly

I am reading your poetry for the first time and am impressed by your talent....unique and profound...love n luck...BHUWAN!!!

different and interesting. cleverly done. cheers

In one word... BRILLIANT! In more words.. love the word play and metaphors.. back to BRILLIANT..))

Myrna

Gramatically perfect, although, if a coma is a teas where is the written sign for its counterpart, the smile?
A game of words that have it all, past, present and future.

Georg

an excellent piece John
peace be with you

William

Ab' superb. Some American grammer is different to english(uk)
Written with such seemingly ease. A good metric feet..

oh my John! You have created a masterpiece in grammer,using love
as the connector to all tenses,past present and future. Very creative and a pleasure to read!Your poems are always unique and well constructed!Bravo!

luv,
et

Superb stuff
Ron

. .. ... love how the every.thing just free.falls. .. and how it does mimic the train of thought.....playing with words, dancing with them. ... forgetting the rhythm but never the music- --
and after the rush, i enjoyed the sudden blunt force trauma ending. ...
and how they all tie in with such experience; metaphorically, literally. . .. wonderfully.
they fall into order.....
well done
ness

e l e g a n t

Enjoyed this creative write, well written and clever indeed!
Blessings,
Joyce B.

Cool! I love the word plays that draw the reader through this poem.
Cryssa

Sweet metaphoric wordplay. Very nice.
blessin's to you JL,
cynth'ya lewis reed

Beautifully penned, John, my new favorite of yours.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

clever!!

Punctuation...a necessary element in one's life as well as in one's writing. Without it, a run-on thought and lifeless life.

God bless you. Kathy

This is a very determined thought pattern here that makes me start relating. Nouns and pronouns and the rhthym of our hearts is all related verbally in passionate ways we never think about. Amazing!!
Love,
Susan

You have indeed written of the lost grammar, excellent write John and thank you for sharing.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

You have covered it all . . . Which give me an idea . . . Very nice . . .