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The Day You Said Goodbye
by Jenni Kalicharan → (All Poetry by Jenni Kalicharan)
  
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Twenty-three years ago today, you left this world,
Leaving behind nine kids with hearts so cold.
At that time I was only twenty-three,
And the youngest was merely a baby.

I still remember it as tho' it was yesterday,
You're still so alive to us in every way.
Sometimes I'm still filled with so much sadness,
It was hard at times dealing with all the madness.

Your ideals and values still live within us all,
To the younger ones, these values I constantly try to install.
And except for one, they all made me proud,
As I'm sure you've noticed from your home in the cloud.

The girls have all grown up now,
I was happy I kept my vow.
They all have families of their own,
Yet they have never left me alone.

Big brother has migrated, left our little island,
Made a home for himself in a place so grand,
If only our last brother didn't have all those scars,
He wouldn't, today, be behind bars.

So today, as I passed by your grave,
I tried, for their sake, Mom, to appear brave.
I hold on to the best of your memory,
Knowing that they will have to suffice for me.

~~^~~

21.01.02



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 Reviews of "The Day You Said Goodbye"
Reviewed by Oisín Breen (Reader)
Reviewed on January 22, 2003
beautifully written.

Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen
Reviewed on January 21, 2003
Ahh, Jenni, I can relate, my father divorced his wife and 6 kids, left town, and died...leaving such a void in all our lives, we never even had values instilled into us from him...I feel your mother, beaming with pride over you, I salute you and her, Jenni, may her spirit live in you.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on January 21, 2003
Beautiful tribute
Love
Tinka

Reviewed by michael horetsky (Reader)
Reviewed on January 21, 2003
I didnt need to cry right now... So beautifull. I lost my Father young... God bless you ..

Reviewed by Betty Rickard (Reader)
Reviewed on January 21, 2003
Your mother I'm sure is smiling down at you...I know she is proud of you...What a grea t poem and how wonderful you took care of your brothers and sisters..Excellent write..

Be blessed,
Hugs,
Betty

Reviewed by Trixie Love
Reviewed on January 21, 2003
Jenni, Such a beautiful tribute to your mother's memory..
It is sooo difficult
when we lose a loved
one...
Then again, We did not
lose them, For we
know right where they are...
Beautiful heartfelt
write Jenni...

Reviewed by kay devenish
Reviewed on January 21, 2003
Such a beautiful poem Jenni she would be proud of you.

Reviewed by Janet Caldwell
Reviewed on January 21, 2003
Sweet Jenni, you my friend have written a power house. This is spectacular. I am honored to be 'among' such a one as you.

Love, Janet xoxoxo

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray
Reviewed on January 21, 2003
Lovely tribute for you Mom, Jenni. I agree with Ron

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on January 21, 2003
Wonderful write Jenni
I believe she hears you...

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on January 21, 2003
This is superb.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on January 21, 2003
Jenni What a splendid remembrance for your mother,and all the family. This is outstanding. You deserve praise to have taken on that responsibility so young.

Reviewed by Kenneth Bielby
Reviewed on January 21, 2003
Thank you for your loving tribute to your loved one..the loss of a guiding hand can like be very traumatic for those who are close


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