She was the yin to his yang.
He was the dot to her 'i'.
When she was black and white,
he was the colors in between.
He finished her sentence.
She felt his thoughts.
They understood each other
from the inside out
because that's how they began.
She was the words, he the notes,
together, an endless song.
He was her real after surreal dreams,
she the pier where he anchored his soul.
He was the rope when all else pulled her away.
She was his lamp in the dark.
Hers were the blue that mirrored the brown
in the looking glass eyes of the heart.
She was the soft to his hard
and when the door was closed,
when all the lights blinked out,
they were both fire and ice
blurring the lines
between the she and the he
until he was time, she the clock,
and together, eternity.
The writing, as always, superb. I would have to say these two 'had' to meet, nor each would ever be complete. Your profound detail of writing, IMHO, has no peer.
loveya
Rusty
Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)
Reviewed on September 30, 2006
exquisite..it's been a while since I read such marvelous verse pertaining to soulmates..wow!
A beautiful poem, CJ; deep and full of meaning. "...blurring the lines between the she and the he
until he was time, she the clock,
and together, eternity."
Online Soulmates is not just a love passing episode, but eternally the marrow of it...in synch and channeled accordingly and far reaching into the metaphysical...precision in the course of love and romance, CJ...
I am glad I came here to read this wonderful tribute to everlasting love. Love. The word is used today at the drop of a hat, but the meaning of it has withered and almost died in today's "me-me" society. Excellent rendition.
A collection of love poetry both relatable and unique.. Poems both joyful, playfu , yearning and romantic. The Poet has exposed his heart and soul in words of love and admiration. Take a journey through the thoughts of a Contempary poet of love. Poet
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loveya
Rusty
saved this one..thankyou CJ
Vesna:)
until he was time, she the clock,
and together, eternity."
...and together, eternity... Great work!
God Bless
Love, Lena
I've enjoyed reading it very much
Love & Peace
William
Tami
Elizabeth
Sage
Love Tinka
With affection,
Eileen
Intelligent work....
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
This sits as nicely,.... as two halves fitting snugly together as a whole..
Shalom
Peter
Peace. Joyce
I liked it !
Bom Bhole!
Rosh
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