Sweet Revenge (poem) by CJ Heck on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by A PAX

Reviewed on November 2, 2006

wow
CJ
this would make a great CW song

Reviewed on October 22, 2006

You have a typo in the line -hoping someone sees here there-I think you meant her not here. I like the poem. You do an excellent job with human nature poems. I like the two line line rhyme scheme, also. I might try that. Nice job. I'm gonna read more of yours but probably not comment on them.

Steve Robertson

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on October 16, 2006

Excellent capture of the moment , with a surprie finale! napkins work well for talented people ;-)

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on October 16, 2006

Engaging verse, with just the right amount of suspense too many can identify with. Well done, CJ! You can write about ANYTHING!!!!!!!!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Phillip William Allen

Reviewed on October 16, 2006

A pen with many views.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on October 16, 2006

Interesting write with just the right twist at the end!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on October 16, 2006

Poor girl was jilted, and stayed there like a faithful pet..

BTW did you get her number? tell tell tell..

Reviewed by H. Lena Jones

Reviewed on October 16, 2006

You are remarkable, CJ, to pen a poem such as this. I'll say this though, I feel sorry for all broken-hearted men and women. They shouldn't have to face that awful pain, still, I don't believe revenge is the way to heal a broken heart.

Much love...God Bless
Lena

Reviewed by Brett Moore

Reviewed on October 16, 2006

You created poetic justice here. Same table even. Nice one, CJ

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on October 16, 2006

A sad but universal theme, CJ. Thank you. Love and peace,

Regis

Reviewed by Approximately Naive

Reviewed on October 16, 2006

Highlights just how combatative and bitter many relationships can be.

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on October 16, 2006

Interesting write with the pangs of anger and misery seeping through. Very well done CJ.

Fee

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)

Reviewed on October 16, 2006

CJ that was a fine poem, though I would have liked another ending. For revenge can never be sweet. Victor

Reviewed by Rusty Daily

Reviewed on October 16, 2006

No where, no time, no how is anything or anybody free from the imagination of a poet. You know CJ, she may have been collecting donations for the Salvation Army. (snicker...snort). All the great components of a good poem. Wonderfully written.
Here's looking at you kid Hugs
Rusty

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on October 16, 2006

CJ

I agree with Dark Angel below

Your attention to detail, and your acumen for innovation stands out in this fly on the wall poem..

Great stuff !

Love and Hugs

Peter

Reviewed by Dove JoAnne Cromp (Reader)

Reviewed on October 16, 2006

Powerful accound dearest CJ!!!

Love, Dove

Reviewed by Shinya Yawakazi (Reader)

Reviewed on October 16, 2006

Aww..wow this is a really good poem and you wrote it on a napkin as well lol.Very good job at detailing it and the scene of which you said it took place^_^