Baby Sister (Preschool) (poem) by CJ Heck on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on October 19, 2006

Got me smiling this morning

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on October 19, 2006

HAHA, no you have to spend a fortunes at Mama's n Papa's for those..

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)

Reviewed on October 19, 2006

What a way you have with children. I admire you for that. As an ex-teacher I appreciate the love for the little ones. Victor

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on October 18, 2006

hahaha leave it to you CJ! What a wit you are;-)love it!

Reviewed by H. Lena Jones

Reviewed on October 18, 2006

This is so precious, CJ, absolutely adorable. "Why don't baby sisters come with training wheels?" You come up with the most amusing poems. Thank you.

Peace and love
Lena

Reviewed by Gloria Buono

Reviewed on October 18, 2006

Ha, this is so adorable and precious. Delightful prose and wonderful tribute to all of us with baby sisters. Thanks for sharing. My best, Gloria

Reviewed by Edwin Larson

Reviewed on October 18, 2006

LOL...too cute...this is a keeper CJ!

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on October 18, 2006

Great question, CJ. Engaging, adorable, yet poignant verse. BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on October 18, 2006

Too cute but sounds like it is the voice of a little girl for sure and a little girl's logic. Well done.

Fee

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on October 18, 2006

CJ,

This is too adorable; thanks for the grins today! Very well done; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Taylor Ryan

Reviewed on October 18, 2006

Just delightfully seen through the eyes of a sibling...and it makes so much sense....all the perfect words have been taken, CJ...but I remember my own training wheels and two little brothers who had none.
xo Taylor

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on October 18, 2006

Precious...

Reviewed by KJ McPhee

Reviewed on October 18, 2006

And little L- plates saying new Baby driver. Ha! Very cute poem - made my little legs wobble with pleasure. Drive safely, CJ. :-))) kenny

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on October 18, 2006

Falling a lot early on is good training for the many "falls" she must take throughout her life. I know you didn't mean this to be serious, but . . .

Reviewed by J M (Reader)

Reviewed on October 18, 2006

Cj,
so adorable and from a childs point of view excellent...

Light & Peace,
Joselyn

Reviewed by Rusty Daily

Reviewed on October 18, 2006

You know CJ, If you really, really, really try, I think someday you will master the art of writing from a child's point of view. Oh, and thanks, when I read this I snorted pepsi all over my screen. Who's going to clean up this mess. This little short ditty packs a real big punch. Brilliant
Your Biggest Fan...I am aren't I? Hugs
Rusty

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on October 18, 2006

Awwwwww...this is precious!!

Thank you!!

Love tinka

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on October 18, 2006

CJ,

Excellent question but I think this applies to life also. " Why doesn't life come with training wheels?" I guess it's all by trial and error.

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling

Reviewed on October 18, 2006

I wondered this about my daughter when she was a toddler, I didn't know if I would ever see her without bruises or bangs and bumps, you may have to put a patent on your idea for training wheels....Cute write and so much said in a few words...I love your children's poetry.
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling

Reviewed by alejapoet@aol.com Bennett

Reviewed on October 18, 2006

Oh this is so cute and I know it hurts you to see her fall. I have a 3 year old and really hate to see him fall. He has been walking since he was nine months. He was and still is so little. you know.