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Jesus Cheer
by larry r linville → (All Poetry by larry r linville)
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We get so loud an shout about how much we love God ----- when we should be following Jesus' example.


The cheer began….
“We love Jesus, yes we do
We love Jesus, how about you?”
A group across the way echoed,
“We love Jesus, yes we do
We love Jesus, how about you?”
Back and forth the challege
was batted like a tennis ball.
The early angelic smiles
soon became sneerful
as each side wanted to win
the “Love Jesus” chant.
Voices became higher pitched
more shrill
more unpleasant to hear
with increased volume.

Meanwhile, across town
someone
silently
fed a hungry person.

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 Reviews of "Jesus Cheer"
Reviewed by chris stienstra (Reader)
Reviewed on August 29, 2007
Hurray! Awesome! Standing ovation.......
I loved this one. Larry, I enjoy your writing very much. Thank you.
Chris

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on August 28, 2007
And the one lone person feeding one who was hungry won the day and the attention of Jesus. It is not in the shouting but in the doing .....

Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
Reviewed on August 28, 2007
You write so clearly about those who trumpet God's message, but fail to put it into action. I could feel the people's passion rising, and felt the tenderness at the end.
Such expression!
Kathy

Reviewed on August 28, 2007
WWJD: Amen, brother. Jesus, I fear, would cringe at some of religion's shenanigans....well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on August 28, 2007
I believe we should all love Jesus, and I chant in prayer each day and try to be pleasing to Him. A sure way is to open our hearts to others. Thank you for sharing your words with us.
Rose

Reviewed on August 28, 2007
Enjoyed~Very interesting indeed and quite possible too!

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on August 28, 2007
We do lose our perspective at times and forget what Jesus taught us.


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