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Paper Not Colored On
by larry r linville → (All Poetry by larry r linville)
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A friend told about his young daughter telling how she was feeling.

 

 
Her wisdom in words far exceed her years.
She spoke in uniqueness one seldom hears.
People besides her parents amused
at the creative language this child used.
 
“I feel like a piece of paper,” she blared,
“That’s never been colored on” she declared.
From out of nowhere this gem was stated
like other sayings she had created.
 
I laughed loudly and then I had a thought
that this young lady had just said a lot.
If all of us start life as a blank page
what is found on it is kind of a gauge.
 
A life which is lived alone and unused
is often a life which is very confused.
But life which is filled with activity
has multiple colors that all can see.

 


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 Reviews of "Paper Not Colored On"
Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen
Reviewed on December 10, 2008
Enjoyed! Your title intrigued me, Larry, my first synonym-thought was 'blank'. I like yours better.

Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen

Reviewed by D Johnson
Reviewed on December 9, 2008
Larry, quite a nice bit of writing...

Cheers and peace,
Dan

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on December 9, 2008
The wisdom of children, often amazes.

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on December 9, 2008
A philosophical girl...not less!
Great story, and what they said? from the mouth of children...

Georg


Reviewed by Elizabeth Hobbs (Reader)
Reviewed on December 9, 2008
Hi Larry
How very true your words. If only there were many more coloured pages in the world, how much better off the world would be. Cheers. Liz

Reviewed by Emile Tubiana
Reviewed on December 8, 2008
Dear Larry, Very well done, it is now up to her and up society to color the page with beautiful colors before Christmas, if possible. If the will is there, there is a way. Love Emile

Reviewed on December 8, 2008
Hello Larry,

How true in a way that we are like blank papers at the start of life. The hardships and pain we go through life brings different colors on that paper, and some of those "we need to erase" or adjust to create a better picture. Very insightful and beautifully written poem.

Cynthia


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