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Little Black Haired Girl
by larry r linville → (All Poetry by larry r linville)
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Recalling a girl I saw when I was very young -- too young for girls.

 

 
He was only ten years old
and girls were the enemy.
A girl walked out from the crowd
just as pretty as could be.
 
He saw her black curly hair
and did not know what to think.
Her smile and her big brown eyes
stood out with her dress of pink.
 
Enemies don’t look like that.
It made the boy so confused.
His big hatred for girls
he was beginning to lose.
 
He hid behind his mommy
but her movements he would track.
When he peeked around mother
that pretty girl looked back.
 
And when the night was over
as he walked out the door
he stopped as he was leaving
and looked at that girl once more.
 
He never saw that girl again
but in every crowd he looked.
Although he still hated girls
on that girl this boy was hooked.
 

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 Reviews of "Little Black Haired Girl"
Reviewed by David Clure
Reviewed on December 5, 2013
What a timeless poem, and told so well! Liked the detail, and the truth expressed here- excellent poem, just EXCELLENT!
~ zACH

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on July 31, 2009
Oh they really don't hate girls, that is their way of hiding the fact that they care Larry. Thank you for sharing.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on July 19, 2009
I LOVED THIS...WOW! WRITTEN WITH ALL THE ELEMENTS OF GOOD POETRY SO EVIDENT AND SUPPORTING YOUR THEME SOLIDLY. THANKS FOR THE SHARE AND GOD BLESS. JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on July 19, 2009
first loves, real or imagined, have a lasting effect ...

Reviewed by D Johnson
Reviewed on July 19, 2009
Larry, Isn't it amazing how even the simplest things stay in our heads forever. Nice writing.

Cheers,
Dan

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on July 18, 2009
Maybe she wasn't just a girl, maybe she was an angel trying to tell you that they were around, and left that little memory in your heart so you will not forget...I am sure you two will meet again and prove me right!

Georg


Reviewed by Elizabeth Hobbs (Reader)
Reviewed on July 17, 2009
Hi Larry
She certainly made an impression on you. It's a pity you never met. I like your poem. Cheers! Liz


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