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I See in You
by Carin Spirit → (All Poetry by Carin Spirit)
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Let go...I cannot protect you from yourself, no matter how I try

What is it I see in You?

 

I see a self annointed ruler  

An Ego that soars above the rest  

I see selfish intentions...  

From your broken Soul

Look at me 

See the Darkness in your eyes?  

I am your reflection

See what you look like?

 

What is it I see in You?  

I see self-hatred  

I see pain, I see fear 

I see nothing at all


In my mirror, you disappear and I  pray for you,

Open your eyes

Look into your mirror

Look deep...

 

You too Are Beauty

You too are Love 

 

Cast your hatred into nothing

It is eating you Alive 

Stay here on earth 

 

Reflect your Beauty 

It is truly Astounding 

You too are Love 

 

This is what I want to See

 

Carin' Spirit 2010

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "I See in You"
Reviewed by Ann Marquette
Reviewed on June 28, 2010
Wow! This is amazing. I love it.

Reviewed by Elizabeth Russo
Reviewed on June 26, 2010
Strikes right at the heart Carin! Oh that we could get someone we love or care for to stop and really see who they are, deep inside ... sometimes, like ourselves, we can't see what is right in front of us. Such a deep and meaningful write! ~Hugs, Elizabeth

Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Reviewed on June 26, 2010
A very powerful piece Carin, thank you for sharing...

Carole~

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on June 25, 2010
This is for all of us, Carin' and it's strong and very worthwhile.

John

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on June 25, 2010
I think you express a universal truth for many sad and hateful individuals in this life/world, Carin' Spirit. Thank you. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by Dayvid Graybill
Reviewed on June 25, 2010
A powerful poem progressing from negatives to positives. Good stuff!

Peace,
Dayvid

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on June 25, 2010
How very true as we look in a mirror, we see what we see and it is usually what we want to see Carin. A wonderful write.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Paul Judges
Reviewed on June 25, 2010
Very well written

Reviewed by Michelle Mead
Reviewed on June 24, 2010
A battle with selves was how I perceived it, and it's a battle fought often-great poem.

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on June 24, 2010
Very well written and powerful, Carin'.

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on June 24, 2010
Very well said.

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on June 24, 2010
Very nicely done, a lot of truth and feelings in this one...
fee

Reviewed by TONY NERONE
Reviewed on June 24, 2010
Nicely done tribute.


GOD BLESS YOU
TONY


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