I Want to Change the World (poem) by Bernice Angoh on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on November 8, 2008

Such a beautiful write Bernice as I want to change the world too. I am so sorry to hear of your loss dear one. Thank you for sharing, you will be in my prayers and thoughts.

Newfie hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on November 7, 2008

...and Dad is looking at you being so proud! ! !

Georg

Reviewed by Liana Margiva

Reviewed on November 7, 2008

Very nice!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Nahsang Jones (Reader)

Reviewed on November 7, 2008

SO moving as usual, sometimes I wish I could be more of my best everyday and I know I am happiest when I am giving life my all...

PS Lemonade street is genuis in its simplicity. It so moved my soul in all these diffrent ways, I love it! You are our Maya Angelou and I pray you go that far..

Reviewed by Axilea MU

Reviewed on November 6, 2008

Very lovely images, sweet and strong at the same time.
I want to change the world too!
The world needs idealists, they've been hiding for too long.

Axilea

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on November 6, 2008

Beautiful write, Bernice; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :)

Sorry about your daddy's passing; you are in my thoughts and prayers during this sad time; may God give you peace, comfort, and strength that passes all understanding!

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on November 6, 2008

Welcome home, Bernice, your beautiful, inspiring words have been missed. As have you. :) This is gorgeous, in image and verse.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

So sorry 'bout your Daddy - please accept my deepest condolences

Reviewed by Ann Marquette

Reviewed on November 6, 2008

Truly wonderful and beautiful from your heart.
So glad you are back.

ann

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on November 6, 2008

God bless for seeing the beauty and reaching higher and higher...

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by John Flanagan

Reviewed on November 6, 2008

Bernice,
Elegant and honourable thoughts and the poem has the quality of prayer. Thank you for this.
John

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Reviewed on November 6, 2008

very sweet sentimental verse Bernice, I'd say you're off to a great start, on a hard job, the world is both sweet and sour, sweeter under your power, hugs

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on November 6, 2008

oh how I want to change the world
to embarce the darkness in this horrid space
and light it up with the smile of my eyes

Such lovely and noble sentiments, Bernice. Thank you for sharing them. Love and best wishes to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Shedding Light

Reviewed on November 6, 2008

This is the the most perfect example of spiriuality.
You have some beautiful ideals, and a great imagination.

Harold M. Nash

Reviewed by Cryssa C

Reviewed on November 6, 2008

but you do this every day with your attitude and thoughts you share with us.

Cryssa

Reviewed by Marcia Miller-Twiford

Reviewed on November 6, 2008

Dear Bernice,
It's people with an attitude and desire like you who will change the world. We need more like you. Great poem my friend.
Marcia

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)

Reviewed on November 6, 2008

Very beautiful writing sweet lady,I sure have missed you...be well and always safe...Hugsssss

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson

Reviewed on November 6, 2008

Beautiful sentiments, Bernice.

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart

Reviewed on November 6, 2008

The world so needs to change, inspiring write.

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on November 6, 2008

Well from your poetry and from your profile I would have to say you are changing the world and by spreading your warmth and love you are also helping others to change it as well...

hugs
fee

Reviewed by Charlie

Reviewed on November 6, 2008

Comes out strong and purposeful... I love refrains. I found myself skipping over it though, after the first 4 stanzas. What if....

What if you leave the first 4 as is, then cut out the refrain on the next few, so it's just one huge run-on of things you want to do--things you see to change, and then add the refrain, backwards, to the end? Would that make it stronger? Check it out.

Then again, who am I to suggest to you... any way you put it, it's beautiful sentiments that just show what I already know about you-- your heart could fill up this world. --Charlie

Reviewed by Mary Patterson

Reviewed on November 6, 2008

A heartfelt poem.! Your reaching for the sky with noble goals!...Great ...M

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)

Reviewed on November 6, 2008

What a beautiful poem Bernice
and what a truly wonderful cry
"I Want to Change the World'
With a heart like yours,
and the pure true love that
is evident in all your writings
it's people like you... who will!
God Bless,and keep writing, love Holly

Reviewed by Bonnie May

Reviewed on November 6, 2008

What a beautiful and humble write. Pray and it shall be done for you already achieved by writing this inspirational poem. Thanks for stopping by, hugs, Bonnie

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on November 6, 2008

Very noble goals Berniice! It is said that if you want something bad enough,you can get it! I believe that especially with prayer, in spirit and truth. Then if God sees it is okay for you He'll help you achieve it! If you can't you should not despair, but go on to do whatever you can.

Love,
eileen